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Jammer's Review
Star Trek: Enterprise
"These Are the Voyages..."
**
Air date: 5/13/2005
Written by Rick Berman & Brannon Braga
Directed by Allan Kroeker
Review by Jamahl Epsicokhan
"Computer, end program." -- Star Trek: Enterprise signing off with a stunning anticlimax

In brief: Some individual moments are good, but overall it's an unsatisfactory way to "wrap up" this series.

One of the interesting things about Star Trek after 39 years is how the library and time settings have grown so expansive, and yet so familiar, that storylines can drop us into the middle of wherever (and whenever) and we instantly recognize where (and when) we are. We don't bat an eye, because we realize that, hey, here we are in TNG's seventh-season episode "The Pegasus," which happened 11 years ago and now is happening again (for us, anyway). In Star Trek, it's almost a natural occurrence. Timelines don't matter for the audience because Star Trek, at this point, is happening simultaneously in all forms at all times, as a part of the imagination.

"These Are the Voyages" knows this about Star Trek, and that's somehow comforting. Flashback, flash-forward, whatever you want to call it: In this universe it's a perfectly appropriate approach that allows for an unusual way of telling a story. And, more than that, it demonstrates how Star Trek itself has transcended its own mythos and exists as a larger-than-life milieu, TV ratings and box-office sales notwithstanding.

On any other day, that would be what we might see is being demonstrated here. On this particular day, however -- on which Star Trek: Enterprise is airing its final episode and the franchise itself is going away for the first time since TNG started 18 years ago -- I'm not so sure it works. Check that; I know it doesn't work -- not as presented. What I don't know is whether it could've worked given better execution. I suspect it maybe could've.

The central conceit of "These Are the Voyages" is that it's actually framed as a TNG episode (I'm tempted to call it "Pegasus 1.5") in which Commander Riker looks at a holodeck program depicting the crew of the NX-01 on their final mission before the signing of the charter that will eventually form the United Federation of Planets.

The central problem with "These Are the Voyages" is that, really, this doesn't make any emotional sense as a series finale for Enterprise. Riker looks at events in order to gain insight about himself (a recommendation from Counselor Troi), and to decide what to do about the central dilemma he faced/faces in "The Pegasus." In short, he's using the NX-01 crew as a tool to resolve a personal conflict. Wouldn't it have been better for this premise to simply look back at the NX-01 crew to study it as history, as a turning point in human society? By making the show about Riker's personal problem, the show painfully short-changes the historical context of the NX-01 crew. Granted, the historical context is a focus in the episode, but it really doesn't have much to do with William Riker (or vice versa).

I guess it's just as well that Enterprise was canceled, because by the looks of things from what this episode tells us -- which takes place six years after the events of "Terra Prime" -- nothing of any significance would've have happened in the course of the next six hypothetical seasons of this series. The members of the Enterprise crew are not going to change. Not. One. Single. Bit. Hell, they don't even look any older. Forget six years; this episode might as well take place six weeks after "Terra Prime."

Quite frankly, that's depressing. If the narrative is going to move forward several years into the future, couldn't it at least show that the characters have changed ... even a little? TNG's finale, "All Good Things," and Voyager's finale, "Endgame," both showed hypothetical futures in which characters had moved on to new things. But here, Sato is still a communications officer, Mayweather is still a helmsman (both are apparently still ensigns, which is just ridiculous), Trip is still the chief engineer, and so on. Everyone is exactly where they were six years earlier, and there isn't even so much as a hint that they've advanced during that time.

What about Mayweather's talk in "Demons" about reconsidering his personal options and possibly moving back to Earth? I guess it was just that -- talk. And what about Trip and T'Pol, who went through the agonizing loss of their child in "Terra Prime"? You might think that their relationship would've evolved after such an emotional turning point. But from the looks of things, they've soldiered on in neutrality for the last six years ... until the prospect of the crew now about to split up forces them to take stock of their relationship one last time. One would hope that they haven't been spending the last six years playing Will They or Won't They. If they have, we can at least be glad we didn't have to watch it.

And yet the framing device of TNG is somehow comforting. I grew up on TNG and will always have a soft spot for it, and there's something reassuring about the idea of future generations looking back upon the past. Several sets from TNG have been reproduced for a number of scenes aboard the Enterprise-D, much the way the TOS sets were reproduced for "In a Mirror, Darkly." The emotional nostalgia is present and accounted for. There's also a new CG version of the Enterprise-D that looks great.

But there's a built-in problem with the use of flashback for the storytelling, which is that the scenes don't gain any momentum. Every time we start getting into the scenes involving the NX-01, Riker pauses the program, or fast-forwards to later in the day, or inserts himself into the story, until we're all too aware that he's literally driving the narrative and that none of these events are actually happening, except in a holodeck.

There's also the bigger problem of the historical record, which is to say, most of this shouldn't even exist on record. There are private conversations here that couldn't be a part of any record, unless they were reproduced from published memoirs or extrapolated from someone's subjective interpretation. There can be no objective truth in a recording like this -- at least as far as private conversations go -- and we begin to realize that we must be watching the 24th-century equivalent of a made-for-TV movie in which the narrative is "based on a true story." After getting over the initial gee-whiz effect of TNG settings, the holodeck framing device gradually becomes a distraction and a big liability for the events being depicted.

The final mission of the Enterprise before it returns to Earth to sign the charter is less than enthralling. It involves Shran coming to Archer and asking for help (Archer, of course, owes him) to rescue his kidnapped daughter from some aliens whom he'd had some vague dealings with. They want something that might best be described as this week's MacGuffin, because it certainly has no more relevance than that. This leads to some typically generic action scenes with a less-than-epic scope, hardly befitting a series finale. It's perhaps ironic that Shran is the only character in the story to have changed in any significant way in six years (he has a family), while the human characters have apparently all become mechanical slaves to their jobs.

Foreshadowing alert: Troi in the holodeck mentions how Trip doesn't know he won't return from this mission. Trip sacrifices himself in the course of the episode to save Archer. It might be called a heroic sacrifice, if not for the sheer incompetence of how it's depicted. First there's the whole silliness of how the aliens so swiftly get aboard the Enterprise after we've already been told the Enterprise is safe. Then there's the way the hostage situation actually plays out -- underwritten and overplayed -- with Trip flipping out, knocking Archer down, and then leading the aliens to a panel where he pulls out a cable and blows himself up along with the bad guys.

This is painfully contrived and poorly, ham-handedly executed. It's exactly as if Trip had said to himself, "Well, this is where I've been preordained by an already-written history to sacrifice myself, so let's git 'er done!" How many times have we seen exactly this sort of crisis situation play out, where the Enterprise crew is always able to figure out how to cleverly escape -- but not this time, simply because the plot demands that Trip die. This is not a satisfying death scene for a major character by any stretch of the imagination. It borders on goofy.

Similarly, the all-too-muted reaction to Trip's demise is puzzling. Archer consoles T'Pol, but the episode never stops to think that maybe it should be the other way around, considering how Archer has been best friends with Trip for countless years and T'Pol is, well, a Vulcan. There's no funeral, no service, nothing -- at least, not on-camera. Perhaps funerals, services, etc., have been done to death and are seen as cliche, but you simply can't purport a heroic death of a major character and then not deal with it.

All that said, the level of downright hate for this episode is strangely fascinating. Jolene Blalock famously called it "appalling" in an interview, and fans denounced it on the Internet as an unmitigated travesty -- sight unseen -- weeks before it even aired.

Personally, I find the vitriolic bile leveled at this episode (and the vilification of Berman and Braga in particular) from the Internet Trek community to be somewhat over-the-top. Judging by comments I've seen on message boards, you'd think Berman and Braga had strolled into a hospital nursery and murdered a room full of newborn babies. No, this episode does not work, but is it the worst episode of Enterprise ever made? Worse than "Precious Cargo" or "Bound" or "A Night in Sickbay" or a dozen others? Hardly. This isn't even the worst episode this season. It's a mediocre show with some highlights and lowlights. The episode itself probably would've fared better had the concept not unfortunately also served as the series finale.

What's kind of sad is that the episode is actually, genuinely well-intended. It has general ideas and sentiments and historical perspectives that are in the true spirit of Star Trek. It's just that the generalities are not adequately developed as specific ideas for the Enterprise characters, and the show ultimately comes across as an ill-executed, ponderous, miscalculated melding of two Trek series, neither of which comes into real focus. Like much of Enterprise as a series, it doesn't stop and ask: Who are these people, exactly? What do they want out of life? What makes them tick? Perhaps it's not about the individuals but about the state of the Federation -- but even then, I was left confused because this story seems to make a distinction between the alliance being formed here and what will ultimately become the Federation. My thinking is, if we're going to fast-forward six years, why aren't we seeing the actual Federation charter being signed? Perhaps I'm confused.

And perhaps that confusion is justified. The whole episode builds up to a speech that Archer is scheduled to deliver, and just as he's walking out to deliver it, Riker interrupts with, "Computer, end program." The sound you heard immediately after that line was fans across the country throwing objects at their television sets. Perhaps ending two episodes in a row with a speech by Archer would not have been ideal, but the anticlimax of ending the story before the would-be dramatic payoff is just flat-out wrong.

As a final act of redemption, "These Are the Voyages" does get the last 30 seconds right, with a series-melding montage that blends TNG, TOS, and Enterprise, with three captains speaking the famous Star Trek mantra. It's the right note for an episode that contains a number of wrong ones.

And that's how Trek comes to an end after a run of 18 consecutive years -- with a somewhat ponderous whimper that still manages to show its self-affection. Maybe too much misdirected affection for TNG. And not enough for the characters we've been watching for the past four seasons.

Previous episode: Terra Prime

End-of-season article: Fourth Season Recap

20 comments on this review
Daniel Williams - September 29, 2007 - 12:04 pm (USA Central Time)
I just read the Enterprise novel "The Good Men That Do". Basically it goes over the real events of what happened and that this depiction of history was a Section 31 cover up, which for me makes this episode more watchable.

It gives Trip a much more heroic send off and what's even better he doesn't kick the bucket.
Adam - November 21, 2007 - 06:08 pm (USA Central Time)
It was just a total mess. Why bring back two TNG characters? Why kill off Trip? Why set it years after the previous episode? The blame lies in the people who wrote the episode and responsible for ENT's failure in the first place. Braga and Berman did a lot of good for ST but by the time VOY ended it was time for them to move on and bring in new blood for a new age of sci fi. They refused and the rest is history. Most of ENT doesn't hold up well to the current sci fi gold on TV these days. Unsuprisingly DS9 is just as strong as it was 10 years ago. You can see its influence over everything. And guess what? Neither Braga or Berman (he just paid the checks) had anything to do with it.
Matthew - January 10, 2008 - 12:08 pm (USA Central Time)
I always prefer to think of this episode as a "dream in a shower", because it so rampantly destroys all the good will that seasons 3 and 4 had built up towards Enterprise. More especially, it came straight after a much more appropriate ending in "Terra Prime", which, whilst not a superlative episode in itself, at least managed to treat the characters with respect and give them a hopeful and proper ending. This episode just shits all over that. I think maybe the worst idea is that the absolute nothingness that happens to the characters during 6 whole years. It is so out of step with the realistic 'people' that the last couple of seasons had built up, that it really always feels like it was just tacked on by a completely separate writing team.

Zero stars from me, solely for those reasons.
Stef - February 15, 2008 - 03:15 am (USA Central Time)
Well, I finally made it through Enterprise. And this was my reward.

I couldn't quite believe what I was watching. Mayweather is more Harry Kim than even Harry Kim was. Still and ENSIGN after 10 YEARS?

I assumed that Trip's overacting in his final scene, and that apparent ease of the aliens boarding Enterprise where down to the holodeck trying to piece things together the best it could (not even the writers of the show could expect us to accept all this at face value could they?)

I had to take it all as historical mistakes (similar to Living Witness from Voyager)

What exactly did the cast of Enterprise do to deserve this finale?

Is it only me that thinks Riker and Troi should have been filmed from the neck up and not full body shots? And even then they should have used soft focus. Neither of them aged well. I also found the 'fake' Picard in Ten-Forward far too cheesy (Well, the back of his head anyway).

Even 'The Sisko' had a better death then 'The Trip'

"At least it wasn't 'Bound'" is about the best thing I can say about this episode.
Kyle - June 24, 2008 - 11:25 pm (USA Central Time)
I would have given this episode Zero stars. You were far more charitable than I would have been. This was NO way to end 18 years straight of Trek on TV. Totally unacceptable. And just when Enterprise was starting to get compelling too.
Dan - July 22, 2008 - 07:49 am (USA Central Time)
A wasted opportunity.
robgnow - July 23, 2008 - 08:58 pm (USA Central Time)
I have to agree with the general consensus and disagree with the 2-stars given. This episode had nothing to do with the Enterprise crew and everything to do with Riker... a slap in the face to the actors of Enterprise. All of the weaknesses and ridiculousness has already been pointed out above, so I won't rehash them, but I felt NOTHING over Trip's demise, except glad for Mayweather (maybe he'll be able to pilot the shuttle more) and Reed (maybe he'll be able to get in on future heroics for a change). Trip was completely over-used throughout the series doing things that had nothing to do with engineering (it was like Geordy performing Data and Worf's jobs in every other script). This is nothing against Trineer as an actor because I liked him immensely, but he was given too much screen time in nearly every episode, leaving Hoshi, Reed and poor Mayweather with little to do.
I'd give this one a half of one star. It wasn't an episode of Enterprise... it was a belated episode of TNG. I feel insulted on behalf of the Enterprise cast.
Vylora - October 16, 2008 - 02:22 am (USA Central Time)
I'd have to agree with the consensus on this as well. This is a slap in the face especially to everyone who has been with Trek for so long. (I personally have seen every episode of every series over my lifetime.) To end 18 years of consecutive mainly very good programming with TNG masquerading as ENT is like handing someone dog sh*t after saying it's caviar.

However I DID see some of the good intentions you pointed out Jammer and I agree with the vast majority of your reviews but I can't go above one star on this one. I just can't.

It's just sad that Star Trek had to end this way especially after the major improvement in the 3rd season (minus the Temporal Cold War) and the bile that Voyager pumped out in 60% of it's episodes (though the high points of Voyager were so good that it left me scratching my head wondering why they couldn't keep it up).

Maybe if they took the phenomenal storytelling of DS9 and Ron Moore's BSG and applied it to Enterprise and even Voyager Star Trek might still be alive today as a series. In fact I guarantee that if Ron Moore had full reigns on Enterprise it'd be a far superior show than what Berman, Braga, and Coto produced.

I'd say as a series whole I'd rate them like this:

BSG - *****
- only show I've ever seen in my life with only a few mediocre eps and absolutely ZERO flops - show isn't over yet but continues to impress me - halfway through 4th and final season - definitely onboard for Caprica series

DS9 - *****
- a few flops along the way but an outstanding series that challenged everything Star Trek but yet remained more true to Star Trek than any other series - should have gone for at least one more season - also best series finale ever

TNG - ****
- four stars being generous given that the first 2 and a half seasons really sucked but once it improved it improved drastically - had my favorite overall crew out of all series save for maybe DS9 - series finale outstanding - disappointed that TNG movies were never good except First Contact though Insurrection was entertaining

TOS - ***
- got to hand it to TOS the start of it all - still amazed at how good a lot of the stories are in these episodes but unfortunately their were a lot of bad ones as well - didn't have a true series finale - had some of the best Star Trek movies ever and then there's the one I won't mention...

VOY - **1/2
- very disappointed in this series for it could have been so much more - could've had story arcs right at the beginning dealing with integration of Maquis into the ranks that would have made great storytelling - as earlier stated the high points of the series were so good, I mean SO good, that I was completely confused why there was so much crap - series finale was entertaining (albeit filled with wormholes...sorry...plot holes) but ultimately a major letdown

ENT - **1/2
- ah Enterprise the show that could have been - I was actually quite impressed with the season opener then it kinda was bland throughout the whole run with it's share of low points (a lot) and high points (not enough) - parts of season 2 and a lot of season 3 was the only thing that kept me going - season 4 dropped the ball with only 3 episodes that I truly liked a lot and was kind of glad it was cancelled - worst series finale ever

My rant is over. kthxbai
Larc Dalextrex - December 29, 2008 - 03:02 am (USA Central Time)
..There was a time, in the very beginning, where Stark Trek was about ideas.Thoes ideas were fresh and original, at that time... TOS
...So Trek ends with a wimper, as Enterprise
caters to fanboy wimperings of mere continuity,and posturing bravado...
An era is truly over...
ZZ in WY - December 31, 2008 - 04:11 am (USA Central Time)
Let us hope ST has a new beginning w/ XI
Billy Ainsley - January 15, 2009 - 03:00 pm (USA Central Time)
I live in hope that startrek is reserrected by paramount with a complete new series
Jammer - January 15, 2009 - 03:18 pm (USA Central Time)
^ They are. It's called rebooting the original series as a film franchise. (I guess in regard to your hope, though, that's not what's happening.)
Dan L. - January 29, 2009 - 12:45 am (USA Central Time)
The reboot definitely worked for the Batman franchise (Academy Award snubs notwithstanding); seems to have worked with James Bond (Casino Royale was one of the best action films of the decade, and Quantum of Solace has its defenders, although I am not one of them); and may have worked with Superman (Superman Returns was a decent movie that had the misfortune of only making $200 million in North America and $200 million in the rest of the world. Its costs were rumored to be as high as $270 million, though, so in Hollywood terms, it was considered a financial flop, and there may be no sequel).

No one would argue with respect to any of these three series, though, that the reboot effort was a resounding failure. As the concept of "reboots" is gaining hold (and favor) in our moviegoing consciousness, it would look all the more disappointing were the Star Trek reboot to fail. Star Trek has been unofficially rebooted more times than Billy Martin was fired by George Steinbrenner - most successfully in 1982 and 1987, and kind of in 1992 when DSN launched. Ub But since then, it's been more booted around than successfully "rebooted," as the Next Generation films failed to improve creatively and as Enterprise failed to stanch the decline in the quality of Star Trek television that started with Voyager. This is one of those moments - there were really only three others - 1979, 1982, and 1987, where it is do or die, and if this latest effort falls down, Star Trek may not be able to get up again. I'm keeping my fingers crossed. In earnest.
Straha - February 13, 2009 - 05:32 pm (USA Central Time)
Bit strange. Because of all the bad press "These are the voyages" got, I avoided watching it until just now.
The effect was that while I surely do agree with all the points of critique posted here, I in fact didn't find the episode half as bas as I *expected* it to be. Maybe if it isn't seen as "the episode that ended Enterprise" or "the episode that ended 18 years of continuous Treck", Jammer's two points go ok.
Stefan - March 18, 2009 - 10:17 pm (USA Central Time)
I don't consider this to be an ENT episode. Instead, I consider this to be an addendum to the TNG episode Pegasus. The episode was about how Commander Riker used one of the Enterprise-D's holodecks to reach his decision to reveal the truth to Captain Picard in that TNG episode.

This was a tremendous insult to the ENT cast. Why not simply have a series finale which dealt solely with the ENT cast? What the reasoning for bootstrapping this episode to TNG? The best thing to do to honor the ENT cast is to treat Terra Prime as the series finale of ENT and treat this insult as an addendum to Pegasus.
Chris H - March 31, 2009 - 12:03 am (USA Central Time)
I understand what they were trying to do. They knew it was the absolute end of 18 years of star trek, and wanted to say goodbye to the franchise. But they messed it up so badly. They should of made an episode set in normal space and time, and like terra prime..sort of pointing to it being an integral moment. Or made a super two parter, like All good things. The fact is, viewers saw this simply as an series finale not a franchise finale so it just looked insulting and cheesy.
navamske - September 15, 2009 - 07:16 pm (USA Central Time)
Chris H. wrote: "I understand what they were trying to do. They knew it was the absolute end of 18 years of star trek, and wanted to say goodbye to the franchise."

I think that's only part of it. By creating this prequel, they were canonically putting the adventures of Captain Archer and the NX-01 in the past of Captains Kirk, Picard, Sisko, and Janeway (i.e., retconning). But none of those captains ever mentioned Jonathan Archer or the NX-01, for the obvious reason that from a real-world standpoint, they hadn't been created yet. Nemesis had sucked and there probably wasn't going to be another TNG movie, and no one knew in what form Star Trek would return when it finally did. I think Berman and Braga, before Star Trek The TV Franchise ended, wanted to canonically place Archer & Co. in the other Star Treks' past. Well, not canonically, because the events of "Enterprise" were always canon -- more like "dramatically."

I believe they thought we fans would appreciate this, hence their saying the final episode was a "valentine" to the fans.
Derek - October 1, 2009 - 09:59 am (USA Central Time)
It's a pretty cool idea had it not served as the series finale, as I think Jammer noted. But why oh why oh WHY they decided to stick it into "Pegasus" is way beyond me. I didn't buy Frakes and Sirtis as their 7th season selves anymore than they seemed to...the only thing that worked was the new Ent-D shots and Spiner's voiceover cameo. Given the fact that the actors have aged beyond the realm of convincing us we're in 1994, they should have set it on the Titan or something. But even then, all the stupid things like No One Changes on the NX-01 and Trip's silly death wouldn't be fixed. Oh well, a huge missed opportunity on more than one level, although I think 2 stars is a fair grade for it.
Ken Egervari - February 16, 2010 - 04:03 am (USA Central Time)
This episode was horrible.

The only nice thing about this episode is that we got to see high-def recreation of the TNG sets.

I agree that this finale doesn't do the crew, the arcs or anything justice. Of course, it's written by B&B... so why would they care about all the hard work that Coto and company did throughout the final season?

Coto really did have changes to put in play in season 5 (if they kept going). There would have been changes, but we simply didn't see it. B&B just don't care, so we get a horrible story that is totally irrelevant and doesn't tell us anything about the characters. The whole affair just doesn't matter.

1 star, if that.
Paul - February 16, 2010 - 03:34 pm (USA Central Time)
I agree that the episode was a huge disappointment. One thing that really bothered me, though, was the fact that the timing of events in this ep doesn't work with "Pegasus." Riker wouldn't have had time to spend hours in the holodeck during the actual mission.

Also, the whole point of "These are the Voyages" was that Riker decided to come clean because of his talk with Trip. But, really, it seemed like Riker decided to come clean once he and Pressman walked around the Pegasus engine room and saw dead bodies -- at least, that's how it comes across in the TNG episode.

Enterprise was such an odd series overall -- horrible for most of season one and most of season two, very good in season three and decent in season four.

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