Star Trek: The Original Series
"Turnabout Intruder"
Air date: 6/3/1969
Teleplay by Herb Wallerstein
Story by Gene Roddenberry
Directed by Arthur H. Singer
Review by Jamahl Epsicokhan
There's something to be said about watching characters toy with bizarrely impossible situations, as in "Turnabout Intruder," a perfect example of style over substance. This is little more than an excuse for Shatner to engage his overacting skills at full throttle. (Say what you will about his acting choices, but the bottom line is that he's entertaining.) Is the story remotely plausible? Probably not, even for Trek.
But I can't help myself; this episode—in which Kirk's consciousness is swapped with that of the insanely jealous Janice Lester (Sandra Smith)—is just too entertaining to deny. The concept arises from Lester's former relationship with Kirk gone bad, combined with her deep-running rage over being rejected by Starfleet. She wants his command of the Enterprise, and then wants to stomp on Kirk until he dies.
There's a mad zeal in Shatner's scenery chewing that's appealing, as the Lester-as-Kirk abuses of captaincy extend beyond any realm of sensibility, causing the entire crew to turn against "the captain" one by one. The most interesting aspect of the plot is watching the other officers try to deal with this mess, as they watch their captain descend into lunacy while Spock continues to claim that he isn't their captain. Eventually, Scotty and McCoy are whispering mutiny in the halls. Is this episode in good taste? Not likely. (Some sexist overtones are the most uneasy.) But good fun? I'm inclined to say yes.
Previous episode: All Our Yesterdays
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133 comments on this post
Wed, Feb 20, 2008, 5:09am (UTC -5)
Thu, Nov 8, 2012, 4:44pm (UTC -5)
Thu, Mar 28, 2013, 2:13am (UTC -5)
S1: 2/6/9/7/3/2/0/0/0, av. 2.84 stars
S2: 3/3/8/6/4/0/2/0/0, av. 2.75 stars
S3: 1/2/6/5/4/2/1/2/1, av. 2.27 stars
Series: 6/11/23/18/11/4/3/2/1, av. 2.64 stars
According to Jammer's ratings then obviously the series is strictly decreasing in quality by season (S1 > S2 > S3) with a small drop-off between s1 and s2 and a large one between s2 and s3. This is about what most fans believe, I think.
Mon, Sep 30, 2013, 10:44pm (UTC -5)
Tue, Oct 1, 2013, 2:33pm (UTC -5)
There are quite a few fratboy moments between Kirk and McCoy and from other members of the crew -- remember Sulu's reaction to seeing Ilia for the first time?
Thu, Dec 26, 2013, 4:14pm (UTC -5)
Tue, Dec 31, 2013, 11:33am (UTC -5)
Thu, Jan 2, 2014, 9:37am (UTC -5)
As for the whole matter of Starfleet having no female captains, it could be argued that no STARSHIPS had female captains up until that point. As we learn in "Bread and Circuses," being the captain of a starship is a bigger deal than being the captain of other Starfleet ships. It's possible that Janice was upset that the very, very top positions (we know there were only 12 Constitution-class ships) had gone to men and blamed gender bias when other factors were in play.
I guess what I'm saying is that this episode isn't necessarily more sexist than, "Spock's Brain," "Who Mourns for Adonis" -- where it's strongly implied that Palamas will leave Starfleet when she meets the right man -- or "Mudd's Women," which is the worst example of sexism in the entire Trek canon.
I probably wouldn't have given this three stars, but it's certainly more watchable than most of the third season. I'd rather watch this one three times than sit through "And the Children Shall Lead."
Fri, Jan 24, 2014, 1:49am (UTC -5)
I noticed from the reviews that there is an almost 3 month gap between All Our Yesterdays (one of my very favorites), and this swill. I wonder why. Could it be, given Roddenberry knew the series was finished, he hesitated to make this piece of land fill the final curtain call for the show? Personally I think AOY would have been a much better note to go out on, even if it meant eating the production costs of Turnabout. It's one of those episodes that, were I Roddenberry, I'd rather burn the negatives than let anyone see this waste.
And for what it's worth, considering Janice Lester's behaviour here, it would seem StarFleet was correct in not giving her a command. She clearly has psychological issues and is thus unfit for the job.
Fri, Jan 24, 2014, 8:58am (UTC -5)
Fri, Feb 7, 2014, 1:48pm (UTC -5)
At the end of the day, Lester was crazy, so Shatner had to act crazy! (and man does he chew scenes and spit them out in this one!)
I would love someone to explain to me how this episode is sexist?
Thu, Mar 6, 2014, 5:08pm (UTC -5)
While it's true there were no female Starfleet captains seen in TOS, that doesn't mean they didn't exist, and what has been seen supports the possibility: The Romulans had female captains ("The Enterprise Incident") and it's hard to see them as being more progressive than the Federation. More importantly, "The Cage" and "The Menagerie" establish that the Enterprise's previous first officer was a woman, and that she took command of the ship after Captain Pike's abduction without any objection from the rest of the crew.
Sun, Sep 21, 2014, 12:13am (UTC -5)
Fri, Oct 31, 2014, 9:55am (UTC -5)
Greatest moment? Early on when they get back to the ship and Bones is talking to a seated Kirk. Note how Kirk is doing his nails! Subtle but brilliant.
Shatner i thought played the part really well, he stammers and 'ers..' his way through his rants, the crews faces as he/she gets more desperate towards the end are excellent.
Id give it 4 stars! Throughly enjoyed it.
Tue, Nov 18, 2014, 11:20am (UTC -5)
Top Five
The Enterprise Incident.
Day of the Dove
Tholian Web
All our Yesterday
Light of Zeter - Would had been perfect if it an Uhura episode.
Thu, Nov 27, 2014, 8:44pm (UTC -5)
Tue, Jan 27, 2015, 3:00pm (UTC -5)
That's a shame, because the aspects of the episode which are *not* centrally about Lester and why women need to accept their inescapable womanhood to be happy have some merit and are even particularly appropriate for a series finale. The domino-effect of Kirk getting through to Spock, then consequently to McCoy and Scotty, and then to Sulu and Chekov and finally as a result to the whole of the ship is a pleasing demonstration of the bonds that have cropped up over the series. In his talk with Spock, Kirk-in-Lester's-body explicitly mentions "The Tholian Web" in one of the series' relatively rare direct nods to past episodes; that the two then share a mindmeld (for the first time? I forget) reinforces their closeness. I like that, during the recess, it's Scotty and not McCoy who suggests mutiny, because of course Scotty is the line officer there and the one who has to worry more directly about the ship. I love Sulu and Chekov's passive resistance. There's no Uhura (or Chapel), but maybe there's a good reason for the female cast members to miss out on this episode. That they have a greater loyalty to each other than the letter of the rules, and as such rally around their real captain rather than the impostor, is a good way to demonstrate how their time in space has brought this crew together.
Rating this episode is very hard. I guess I will say 1 star for the Lester material, 3 stars for the crew-mutiny material, for an average of 2 stars.
This leads to ratings for the season, overall. Ratings included where my rating disagrees with Jammer's (parenthetical is the difference between my rating and Jammer's):
The Paradise Syndrome: 1.5 (-1)
Is There in Truth No Beauty?: 3 (+1)
For the World is Hollow...: 2 (-.5)
Plato's Stepchildren: 2.5 (-.5)
Wink of an Eye: 1.5 (-1) (down from the 2 I suggested in the review, after more consideration)
Elaan of Troyius: 1 (-1)
Let That Be Your Last Battlefield: 2.5 (+1)
The Mark of Gideon: 1 (-1)
The Lights of Zetar: 1 (-1)
Requiem for Methuselah: 2.5 (-.5)
The Way to Eden: .5 (+.5)
The Cloud Minders: 2.5 (-.5)
The Savage Curtain: 1 (-.5)
Turnabout Intruder: 2 (-1)
The episodes I'd recommend this season are: The Enterprise Incident (****), The Empath and All You Yesterdays (***1/2), and Is There In Truth No Beauty?, Day of the Dove, and The Tholian Web (***), with a fair number of 2.5 star episodes (Spectre of the Gun, Plato's Stepchildren, Whom Gods Destroy, Let That Be Your Last Battlefield, Requiem for Methuselah, The Cloud Minders) that sort of work for me. Overall, the season is one of the weakest in Trekdom, a rambling affair with few highlights and a great chunk of boring stories with maybe one or two decent ideas with wan execution, or sometimes terrible ideas with a few moments executed well. This sense that the show had run out of ideas and was running on fumes is sometimes present in TNG's last season, of course, but TNG's seventh season had many more memorable episodes and highlights, IMO. The thing that's frustrating about TOS season three isn't so much the worst-of-the-worst episodes, because "Spock's Brain" and "The Way to Eden" are fascinating, not just bad but endlessly *weird*. Episodes like "The Mark of Gideon" or "Wink of an Eye" or, at worst, "The Lights of Zetar" just sit there doing very little, having the appearance of a Trek episode with almost none of the passion that makes this series work.
While "The Lights of Zetar" is arguably Scotty-centric, Chekov gets big roles in "Spectre of the Gun" and "The Way to Eden," and there's a lot of Scotty and Sulu screentime in "That Which Survives," I mostly feel that the season boils down, even more than previous seasons, to the Big Three, to the point where in some episodes like "The Empath" or "All Our Yesterdays" the crew besides them are completely irrelevant to the story. Still, what the season does do well, in some of its better episodes, is depict the slow shift in Spock and McCoy's affection for each other, and the way Kirk fits into their new dynamic as a result. Spock and McCoy were "friends" before this season, but "The Tholian Web" and "All Our Yesterdays" place special emphasis on the relationship between those two with Kirk absent, and the strengthening of that bond makes episodes like "The Empath," about all three of them sacrificing for each other, with all three bonds (Kirk-Spock, Spock-McCoy, McCoy-Kirk) well developed, work. This puts the characters in good position for the movies, especially the way STII and STIII play with the Spock/McCoy bond.
Thu, Jan 29, 2015, 10:16am (UTC -5)
I was overall very pleased with TOS in this rewatch. Season one, in particular, is fantastic, even the weak episodes being quite fresh. Season two is a little bipolar, with some of the series' very best and very worst mixed together, and some mediocre periods as well. What really impressed me, and what I wasn't in a good position to note when I watched the series (scattershot, out of order) when younger, is how well the character development works, in particular Spock's subtle changes with respect to humanity (and his own humanity), and the Kirk/Spock/McCoy bond. There does seem to be a progression through the series, more so than is obvious at first glance. I was also a little surprised that the fairly routine Kirk-bangs-hot-alien-chick material didn't become a cliche until the second season. I was also impressed with Kirk's stoicism, particularly in season one; the exaggerated acting style Shatner is known for in the role is something that gathers steam as the series progresses (partly as the scripts get worse), but initially at least Kirk really does seem a balance between Spock's excessive dislike of emotionality and McCoy's excessive position against Spock's rational nature.
My personal top ten:
1. The City on the Edge of Forever
2. Mirror, Mirror
3. The Doomsday Machine
4. The Trouble with Tribbles
5. Balance of Terror
6. Amok Time
7. The Enterprise Incident
8. The Menagerie
9. Space Seed
10. Tomorrow is Yesterday
Some candidates for the top ten which just missed: The Enemy Within, The Galileo Seven, The Ultimate Computer, The Empath, All Our Yesterdays.
Tue, Nov 24, 2015, 11:03pm (UTC -5)
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Wed, Apr 27, 2016, 3:54pm (UTC -5)
We can try to justify why Janice had to be crazy, but in the end I think it was a case of the individual story (crazy person steals Kirk's body) conflicting with the theme (denying people basic dignity can make them hate themselves as well as you). That she was resentful could be explained by her sense of justice, but the sheer lunacy hurts her message.
The audience would do to remember that it is Janice herself who claims the issue is about being a woman, and while we don't hear anyone else's perspective on the subject the message of one person on a show is not necessarily the viewpoint of the show. If she is insane with jealousy and hatred we don't have to take her word for it but can instead step back and notice that there were probably many discontented but reasonable women in the Federation who we DO NOT hear from about this, and the only reason we hear it from Janice is because she can't take it any more and loses it.
That being said the last line of the show was probably a mistake, but growing up I never made to much of that line to be honest. The takeaway I always had was just that a crazy person tries to take over the ship. That she was a woman mattered to her but it didn't seem to matter much to the story. The crew figures out it isn't Kirk not because he acts like a woman but because he acts like a madman. In short, the feminist thread never really came through, which is perhaps confusing to people who see that it should be there but all they see is a crazy woman.
Sun, May 8, 2016, 6:24pm (UTC -5)
The second captain ever of a starship was female. Watch "Enterprise."
Sun, Jul 24, 2016, 6:49am (UTC -5)
Sun, Oct 23, 2016, 12:09pm (UTC -5)
Wed, Nov 23, 2016, 6:10pm (UTC -5)
Sun, Apr 2, 2017, 2:32pm (UTC -5)
In Court Martial, it's stated that "Not one man in a million could command a starship. A hundred decisions a day, hundreds of lives staked on you making every one of them right." When Kirk (in Janice Lester's body) says why she isn't qualified for the captain's chair we hear about her quest for "the power she craved, to attain a position she doesn’t merit by temperament or training." Nothing about being a woman just that she was nuts and lacked the proper training.
Wed, Apr 5, 2017, 10:26pm (UTC -5)
Watching them squeal is awesome, just like watching Kirk bag every woman like the pieces of joyous flesh they are.
Fuck feminists!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wed, Apr 5, 2017, 11:18pm (UTC -5)
Wed, Apr 26, 2017, 12:31pm (UTC -5)
Fri, May 12, 2017, 5:53pm (UTC -5)
Sat, Jul 8, 2017, 2:45pm (UTC -5)
Some? This episode wasn't surpassed until Profit and Lace. Awful!
Mon, Jul 17, 2017, 2:52am (UTC -5)
Thu, Aug 24, 2017, 8:31pm (UTC -5)
"And, in the end, the love you make is equal to the love you take."
Mon, Dec 4, 2017, 8:19am (UTC -5)
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29 November, 1966
Dear Isaac:
Sorry I had to address it in this round-about way since I did not have your address and Harlan Ellison, who might have supplied it, is working a final draft for us and is already a week late and I don't want to take his attention away from it for even a moment. On second thought, I believe he is a month or two late.
Wanted to comment on your TV Guide article, "What Are A Few Galaxies Among Friends?"
Enjoyed it as I enjoy all your writing. And it will serve as a handy reference to those of our Star Trek writers who do not have a SF background. Although, to be perfectly honest, those with SF background and experience tend to make the same mistakes. I've found that the best SF writing is no guarantee of science accuracy.
A person should get his facts straight when writing anything. So, as much as I enjoyed your article, I am haunted by this need to write you with the suggestion that some of your facts were not straight. And, just as a writer writing about science should know what a galaxy is, a writer writing about television has an obligation to acquaint himself with pertinent aspects of that field. In all friendliness, and with sincere thanks for the hundreds of wonderful hours of reading you have given me, it does seem to me that your article overlooked entirely the practical, factual and scientific problems involved in getting a television show on the air and keeping it there. Television deserved much criticism, not just SF alone but all of it, but that criticism should be aimed, not shot-gunned. For example, Star Trek almost did not get on the air because it refused to do a juvenile science fiction, because it refused to put a "Lassie" aboard the space ship, and because it insisted on hiring Dick Matheson, Harlan Ellison, A.E. Van Vogt, Phil Farmer, and so on. (Not all of these came through since TV scripting is a highly difficult specialty, but many of them did.)
In the specific comment you made about Star Trek, the mysterious cloud being "one-half light-year outside the Galaxy," I agree certainly that this was stated badly, but on the other hand, it got past a Rand Corporation physicist who is hired by us to review all of our stories and scripts, and further, got past Kellum deForest Research who is also hired to do the same job.
And, needless to say, it got past me.
We do spend several hundred dollars a week to guarantee scientific accuracy. And several hundred more dollars a week to guarantee other forms of accuracy, logical progressions, etc. Before going into production we made up a "Writer's Guide" covering many of these things and we send out new pages, amendments, lists of terminology, excerpts of science articles, etc., to our writers continually. And to our directors. And specific science information to our actors depending on the job they portray. For example, we are presently accumulating a file on space medicine for De Forest Kelly who plays the ship's surgeon aboard the USS Enterprise. William Shatner, playing Captain James Kirk, and Leonard Nimoy, playing Mr. Spock, spend much of their free time reading articles, clippings, SF stories, and other material we send them.
Despite all of this we do make mistakes and will probably continue to make them. The reason—Thursday has an annoying way of coming up once a week, and five working days an episode is a crushing burden, an impossible one. The wonder of it is not that we make mistakes, but that we are able to turn out once a week science fiction which is (if we are to believe SF writers and fans who are writing us in increasing numbers) the first true SF series ever made on television. We like to think this is what we are trying to do, and trying with considerable pride. And I suppose with considerable touchiness when we believe we are criticized unfairly or as in the case of your article, damned with faint praise. Quoting Ted Sturgeon who made his first script attempt with us (and now seems firmly established as a contributor to good television), getting Star Trek on the air was impossible, putting out a program like this on a TV budget is impossible, reaching the necessary mass audience without alienating the select SF audience is impossible, not succumbing to network pressure to "juvenilize" the show is impossible, keeping it on the air is impossible. We've done all of these things. Perhaps someone else could have done it better, but no one else did.
Again, if we are to believe our letters (now mounting into the thousands), we are reaching a vast number of people who never before understood SF or enjoyed it. We are, in fact, making fans—making future purchasers of SF magazines and novels, making future box office receipts for SF films. We are, I sincerely hope, making new purchasers of "The Foundation" novels, "I, Robot," "The Rest of the Robots," and other of your excellent work. We, and I personally, in our own way and beset with the strange problems of this mass communications media, work as proudly and as hard as any other SF writer in this land.
If mention was to be made of SF in television, we deserved much better. And, as much as I admire you in your work, I felt an obligation to reply.
And, I believe, the public deserves a more definitive article on all this. Perhaps TV Guide is not the marketplace for it, but if you ever care to throw the Asimov mind and wit toward a definitive TV piece, please count on us for facts, figures, sample budgets, practical production examples, and samples of scripts from rough story to the usual multitude of drafts, samples of mass media "pressure," and whatever else we can give you.
Sincerely yours,
Gene Roddenberry
Thu, Dec 14, 2017, 8:16pm (UTC -5)
As I wrote in my review of "All Our Yesterdays," there's something very uncomfortable and weird about watching Shatner play a woman in his own body and the female guest star do likewise, but that is both the weakness and strength of TOS's final episode "Turnabout Intruder." This story by Roddenberry takes the classic Sci-Fi concept of people switching bodies -- later cheapened by Tom Hanks's "Big" and other sitcom-style imitators on TV and film -- as the vehicle for a fresh and tense examination of the great Kirkian fear of losing his ship. There are strong echoes of the Hitchcockian "wrongly accused man" trope in watching the helpless Kirk, trapped in the body of an ill woman, struggle to make people believe him as two enemies continually sedate him (her?) with claims he is delusional. Again, I think "All Our Yesterdays" is the superior episode, but I agree with Jammer's review and give "Turnabout Intruder" a solid three stars.
It may be politically incorrect, and a dramatized reflection of Shatner's own preening egoism projected into the body of Kirk, but "Shatner plays a hysterical woman out for revenge" (not that all women are hysterical, of course) is entertaintly executed in all its details from Shatner doing his nails to clucking his tongue. The early pre-credits line "your world of starship captains doesn't admit women" is clearly a reference to Kirk jilting Lester and driving her mad with the desire for revenge. Her ensuing revenge plot, carried out with the aid of her quack doctor minion, generates real tension in this episode as we watch Lester and Kirk squirm around in each other's bodies like two parasites. Say what you will, but "Intruder" is EDGY about pushing gender boundaries in a way that still feels fresh to our present debate about the impact of sex change operations on public restrooms, and this edginess generates a real discomfort that makes us wonder how the crew will resolve this situation.
Indeed, the fun of "Intruder" also includes Lester-as-Kirk testing the depth and strength of the crew's loyalty to him, especially the response of McCoy and Spock to the crisis. The threat here is really to the Big Three, as Lester threatens to destroy their three musketeers vibe by killing Kirk and replacing him. It's enjoyable to watch Spock -- him going rogue on the security guards with neck pinches is a nice touch -- and McCoy unravel the mystery and figure out how to fight Lester-as-Kirk. Incidentally, did anyone else notice that Nurse Chapel (Majel Barrett) has given up the platinum blonde hair of seasons one-two and gone brunette for this season three? There's still some blonde highlights there, but it's nice to see Barrett wearing her own hair color. As for the rest of the crew, Uhura doesn't appear in this one and only the Big Three appeared personally in "Yesterdays," so it's interesting to note that "Savage Curtain" is really the last TOS show with the full cast of regulars -- minus many of the semi-regulars like Chapel.
Finally, I don't see how the "jilted ex-lover out for revenge" plot is necessarily sexist or demeaning to women, as it's still a staple of modern-day relationship fiction. And frankly, let's admit it: Kirk can be a colossal jackass even at the same time he is impossibly heroic. Since it's clear that Captain America in Space loves only his ship, and we've seen countless women on this show end up thrown to the side of the road after entering his life briefly, I find it totally plausible that one of them might come back to haunt his paunchy butt. And what's really infuriating is that he's so freaking heroic: How the heck do you win against someone who keeps saving the universe? That seems more than enough to drive someone like Dr. Janice Lester, who really acts no less hysterical than Commander Ben Finney in Seasone One's "Court Martial," crazy. And let's remember that Lester is a DOCTOR -- a rarity for the 1960s, she's obviously a very smart and accomplished woman who (like Finney) can't stand a pompously self-assured ass like Kirk passing her by in life on his long climb to galactic fame. So yeah, I totally buy this story, and I welcome it as a sign of imperfection in the Trekverse that dissenters to the Legend of Kirk exist and are willing to go to the mattresses to wipe the smug grin off of his face. (That sounds more hostile than I mean it, as I personally love the Kirk character, but I think it makes the motives of a Finney or Lester quite relatable to us 21st century plebes.)
Other thoughts: As a series ending episode, I like how the show played its cards close to the vest here, generally running "Intruder" like an ordinary episode but including great callbacks to earlier shows as a sign of self-awareness of the ship's history. In addition to Kirk-as-Lester describing earlier Season Three stories to Spock, the Sulu/Chekov reference to the only death penalty offense being General Order 4 (visiting Talos, as we learned in "Menagerie Part I" back in Seasone One) is a nice touch. For an episode series, these overt continuity references are stronger her than in any earlier episode, giving a sense that the producers were at least aware the series cancellation might actually stick this time even as they were holding out for another writing campaign to get Season Four. As for the "Five-Year Mission," I have always considered the two seasons of "Star Trek: The Animated Series" to represent the final two years of that mission, despite Roddenberry later trying to exclude them from the franchise continuity. Since that continuity is completely muddled after 50 years of self-contradicting incarnations, and Roddenberry-produced TAS (with all its original cast, writers, and sequel episodes) explicitly cites the five-year mission in its opening narration and presents itself as "Star Trek," a continuation of the original show, I feel quite free to claim it as part of the franchise. Now I say to Jammer: Give us some TAS reviews!!! There are only a few 30-minute episodes and you've got plenty of time before "Discovery" (next month) and "Orville" (next fall) come back.
And I'll also say this for "Turnabout Intruder": There's a strong sense that the cast has matured as a unit as TOS ends here. I love how Spock and McCoy doubt almost from the start that Lester-as-Kirk is himself, how they quickly form ranks to investigate and help, and how they instantly risk their careers to fight the intruder. Scotty, Chekov, and Sulu planning mutiny is also a cool bit -- showing how the other series regulars (foreshadowing Star Trek III) have also grown close enough to the Big Three that they will likewise throw their careers under the bus for the group. It's too bad there's no Uhura in this final episode, but I think we can assume where her sentiments would have lain. That this series and TAS ends without trying to "resolve" anything doesn't bother me since the movies (especially Star Trek VI) do that quite well, and TNG has the opposite problem of a great final episode ("All Good Things") and a final movie ("Nemesis") that much like "Intruder" didn't fully admit its own end.
Anyway, at the end of my first-ever chronological marathon of remastered TOS on DVD, I feel I've rediscovered what makes this show great and grown in my appreciation of it. And watching all of those dull TNG and Voyager reruns on BBC USA, plus ho-hum Enterprise and DS9 (which is excellent but somewhat overrated, as there are long stretches of weak shows in seven seasons) on Netflix, I've felt energized by the reality that TOS remains the most original and striking of all Trek shows. There was something really special about this show back in the 1960s, before Paramount reduced everything to a cynical moneymaking formula and brought in soap opera actors to keep rehashing the same story concepts, and I say that as someone who came of age when TNG/DS9 was airing first-run. Part of it, for me, is simply that that TOS cast (even Shatner in his mellower older years) are genuinely lovely and humble people who feel vibrantly real every time they are interviewed or appear in public -- there's something about the light and unselfconscious way they wear their status as cultural icons that just makes me want to hang out with them (the few who are still alive) more than the cast of any other Star Trek series. For whatever reason, I've always felt that the other casts were just cashing their checks, including the current "Discovery" that I actually like very much so far.
Mon, Dec 18, 2017, 4:48pm (UTC -5)
As for the life-entity transfer, some handwaving here as far as how the un-transfer occurs, but it makes for a good plot and the idea of a typical character being hijacked by another entity is a common theme for Trek.
The order to execute Spock, McCoy, Scotty was rather extreme on Lester-as-Kirk's part -- guess it shows how absolutely nuts Lester really was. GR wrote her character (along with Dr. Coleman) to get all the members of the research team on the planet killed to lure in the Enterprise. And given how nuts Lester is (including hating the fact that she was born a woman etc.) should show that this episode can't be taken seriously as sexist or some valid commentary on gender roles. One has to take the Lester character's motives with a seriously large grain of salt.
Find it hard to believe in the end that it seemed like Coleman/Lester would simply get let off the hook for murder etc. The episode just swept that stuff under the rug, which I wasn't a fan of.
3 stars for "Turnabout Intruder" -- the final TOS episode. Doesn't really serve as a series finale, but it's a good episode on its own for Shatner's acting and Spock's persistence (liked the part where his first neck pinch on the security guard was blocked, but then the Vulcan got him with the other hand!). Also included a couple of references to prior episodes ("The Tholian Web" and "The Empath") which is extremely rare for TOS.
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Some quick stats: Overall average score on 100 = 66.7, average 4-star score = 2.7; 28.2% are 3.5-star or 4-star, 5.1% below 1.5 stars. By season avg. score: S1 71.4 (2.86 stars), S2 68.9 (2.81 stars), S3 59.0 (2.38 stars). [There might be a tad of false precision in this exercise!]
Rank. Episode 100 Score, 4-Star Score
78. Spock's Brain 10, 0.5
77. And the Children Shall Lead 14, 0.5
76. The Way to Eden 21, 1
75. Shore Leave 29, 1
74. The Alternative Factor 33, 1.5
73. The Omega Glory 34, 1.5
72. I, Mudd 35, 1.5
71. The Lights of Zetar 36, 1.5
70. The Mark of Gideon 37, 1.5
69. Mudd's Women 42, 1.5
68. The Squire of Gothos 43, 1.5
67. The Savage Curtain 44, 2
66. The Apple 45, 2
65. The Gamesters of Triskelion 46, 2
64. Catspaw 48, 2
63. Assignment: Earth 50, 2
62. That Which Survives 51, 2
61. For the World Is Hollow and I Have Touched the Sky 52, 2
60. The Changeling 52, 2
59. Who Mourns for Adonais? 53, 2
58. The Corbomite Maneuver 54, 2
57. Charlie X 56, 2
56. Friday's Child 57, 2.5
55. Court Martial 58, 2.5
54. Let That Be Your Last Battlefield 59, 2.5
53. Spectre of the Gun 59, 2.5
52. Miri 59, 2.5
51. Whom Gods Destroy 60, 2.5
50. This Side of Paradise 60, 2.5
49. Plato's Stepchildren 61, 2.5
48. The Return of the Archons 61, 2.5
47. Day of the Dove 62, 2.5
46. By Any Other Name 62, 2.5
45. Bread and Circuses 63, 2.5
44. What Are Little Girls Made Of? 63, 2.5
43. Patterns of Force 64, 2.5
42. Requiem for Methuselah 66, 2.5
41. The Paradise Syndrome 66, 2.5
40. The Ultimate Computer 67, 2.5
39. The Enemy Within 67, 2.5
38. Wink of an Eye 69, 3
37. The Deadly Years 70, 3
36. The Man Trap 71, 3
35. Turnabout Intruder 72, 3
34. Return to Tomorrow 72, 3
33. Wolf in the Fold 72, 3
32. Is There In Truth No Beauty? 73, 3
31. Elaan of Troyius 76, 3
30. A Piece of the Action 77, 3
29. Tomorrow Is Yesterday 77, 3
28. The Cloud Minders 78, 3
27. A Private Little War 78, 3
26. Operation -- Annihilate! 78, 3
25. The Menagerie 78, 3
24. Where No Man Has Gone Before 79, 3
23. The Tholian Web 80, 3
22. The Naked Time 82, 3.5
21. The Immunity Syndrome 84, 3.5
20. The Galileo Seven 85, 3.5
19. Errand of Mercy 86, 3.5
18. The Conscience of the King 87, 3.5
17. Obsession 88, 3.5
16. Arena 88, 3.5
15. The Enterprise Incident 89, 3.5
14. Dagger of the Mind 89, 3.5
13. The Empath 90, 3.5
12. All Our Yesterdays 91, 3.5
11. Space Seed 92, 3.5
10 .The Trouble With Tribbles 93, 3.5
9. A Taste of Armageddon 94, 4
8. Journey to Babel 94, 4
7. Mirror, Mirror 94, 4
6. The Devil in the Dark 95, 4
5. Metamorphosis 95, 4
4. The City on the Edge of Forever 96, 4
3. Amok Time 97, 4
2. Balance of Terror 98, 4
1. The Doomsday Machine 100, 4
Thu, Sep 20, 2018, 2:28pm (UTC -5)
They believed women were only good for one thing. Hence, the revealing outfits, only the big busted girls were hired, and they had to show what they had.
As a rule, females did not run around with everything hanging out, the boys wanted to look up skirts and such filth, not like today. We had to be clean and protect ourselves or be branded. There was free sex as it was called, but it was not advertised.
You people don't understand the past. Women were treated as inferior dumb clucks. The male animal believed that a woman should be IN THE KITCHEN, BAREFOOT, AND PREGNANT their entire lives. I was there. However, I was not one of the gooses that laid around and obeyed sexist males!!!!!!! Screw them all!!
I still think that way and I am 76 years old. I don't need men.
Roddenberry was a womanizer with that old-fashioned kick a female around but when he got Majel in his hooks, she did not unhook and slip into the darkness of a liquor bottle. She stayed because in those days, you F..K me, you marry me. It was not like today. In those days the girl did not suck off the boys cause "it ain't sex, you slut".
Shatner's first wife divorced him due his not keeping it in his pants and he was zokcd;xx@((( a young dancer at the studio. In his first book he stated that he did not want the divorce. I can't remember the Scotty actor's name off hand, but on one of discs in the TOS eps he discusses Shatner, and he says......."he is not a nice man...". The entire main cast felt that way because I listened to many interviews with them while Shatner was discussed during the Star Trek cast interviews.
Sat, Oct 20, 2018, 1:34pm (UTC -5)
Wed, Oct 31, 2018, 8:33pm (UTC -5)
It's a lot easier to declare that a character that fits an unfavorable stereotype just HAPPENS to be a member of the group that has traditionally been denigrated with that stereotype if you yourself were lucky enough not to be a member of that group and therefore have not had to spend your life living the stereotype down. It's not that such a character may not occasionally (very occasionally) really just "happen" to be a member of the denigrated group. It's just that if it's had no bad effect on your own life, it's a lot easier to give the writer the benefit of the doubt.
I'll bet you Roddenberry knew very well the origin of the word "hysteria," even if it's a dog whistle some of you can't hear.
Sun, Nov 4, 2018, 10:01pm (UTC -5)
The meaning of a work can change over time; witness feminists burning their bras as symbols of oppression when modern bras were invented and popularized by a woman decades before. In that vein, I think the "Turnabout Intruder" is a show that was trying to be progressive, comes off sexist, but has looped around enough that a modern viewer can take a different but still progressive message from it.
Lester is a tragic character, and the episode hammers that point home. While fans still quibble over exactly how to take the "women can't be starship captains bit" (and it's the hardest part of the episode to explain away, and factors into the series' general issue of being progressive on women in a lot of ways but very quiet on them in leadership roles) I think it's kind of irrelevant insofar as it's just part of Lester's tragic story. Maybe she actually did get passed over unfairly. Maybe Kirk did behave like a jerk, as many young people in relationships did. But it's festered into an all-consuming passion for revenge, like many a classic Trek villain.
I guess the ultimate question is whether you think Lester is supposed to be emblematic of women as a whole, or should be judged as a character. And I think the intention was definitely the latter. Women aren't all crazy people, Lester just was, and it's understandable why.
Tue, Mar 26, 2019, 6:52pm (UTC -5)
Thu, May 16, 2019, 4:18pm (UTC -5)
Hehehe.
Many heartfelt thanks to Trent for typing up the Asimov/Roddenberry letter.
Mon, Jun 10, 2019, 7:19am (UTC -5)
What a surprise and disappointment to learn that, on TOS, Starship captaincy was forbidden to women in the 23rd century. Roddenberry certainly had his limitations of vision.
The way it ends, how Kirk says Janice could have been happy "if only," was especially galling and awful.
Well, @William B, you weren't wrong that this was an awful way to go out. Yesterdays would have made a much better closer.
I think I need a dose of Captain Janeway.
Mon, Jun 10, 2019, 9:29am (UTC -5)
I do like the "mutiny" scenes, from Spock talking to the real Kirk onward to Sulu and Chekov stopping work. I thought it was nice to have some ensemble scenes to go out on. Of course, Uhura is absent, which is pretty glaring in this one.
Glad you liked Yesterdays though!
Mon, Jun 10, 2019, 1:20pm (UTC -5)
"What a surprise and disappointment to learn that, on TOS, Starship captaincy was forbidden to women in the 23rd century. Roddenberry certainly had his limitations of vision."
Unlike TNG and the later series, you shouldn't always take TOS to be what we would call "science fiction", meaning it's showing you a prediction of what the future will be like. Very often TOS uses a sci-fi backdrop to show something contemporary in a different light. In this instance I strongly believe that Turnabout Intruder was *not* saying that in the future women won't be able to be captains. I think what it was saying was that *right now* (i.e. in 1969) networks won't allow female leads on shows. This hearkens back to the series pilot where Roddenberry was told to change Number One to a man because they didn't want the XO to be a woman. I think this 'series closer' is a middle finger to the networks about how backwards they were in treating women like second-class citizens. At least, that's my theory.
Mon, Jun 10, 2019, 2:58pm (UTC -5)
Although, I do wonder sometimes if the depiction of "Lester" by Shatner as a megalomaniac the whole main cast has to rein in was a dig at Shatner's diva-esque behaviour on set (as alleged by the supporting cast).
I think it's worth noting from a behind the scenes perspective that Roddenberry basically had no involvement in the show for season 3, and so it's hard to draw conclusions (positive or negative) about Roddenberry himself from this episode. The writing team behind this episode is (for better or worse) disjoint from the writer that tried to get Majel Barrett in a command position in The Cage. Not that this means they necessarily would disagree with Roddenberry or his mission.
Mon, Jun 10, 2019, 3:36pm (UTC -5)
I agree that we can't directly attribute this show's message to Roddenberry himself, but I largely think that a lot of the messages in TOS were made by pro-active writers with more of an eye on the ball of reality than Roddenberry had.
Regarding how well Lester comes off in this episode according to my theory, I've mentioned earlier in the thread that I think the episode basically fails in its attempt to portray her as wronged, *if that was their intent*, precisely because she's a lunatic. But I could see how there's a Merchant of Venice kind of situation here, where she is now damaged goods but where this damage came as a result of oppression against her. She comes off looking bad, but since it's the system that pushed her to it we see a vicious cycle of victimhood where the victims look bad precisely because of being oppressed, which then creates the "confirmation of their worst fears" that you allude to. It's a self-fulfilling system. That said, if showing this system was their intent I still think they failed, because she's not just damaged goods but a straight-up maniac that has no redeemable message to give us.
My point isn't to argue that this episode is great, but rather to argue that it's message may have been progressive rather than sexist, even thought its execution was botched. I would personally recommend lambasting it for being bad, instead of for being regressive or anti-women. As it happens I don't even quite think it's bad, although it's pretty clearly not good.
Mon, Jun 10, 2019, 3:49pm (UTC -5)
That said, I just remembered to check the episode's credits and Roddenberry wrote the story! So, oops -- I had totally forgotten that. So I was wrong that this episode doesn't represent Roddenberry, unless it went through pretty huge revisions by the time it got from story to teleplay to air (possible).
Mon, Jun 10, 2019, 10:03pm (UTC -5)
The conclusion, in the ep, is not that Janice was driven mad by her inability to fulfill her dream, but by her unnatural desire for power and her inability to accept her womanhood.
Peter, your middle-finger theory is very generous, but doesn't jive, for me. I certainly agree that "the oppressive system became a self fulfilling prophecy" is the right read on this . . . but I think the ep's message is "Look what happens when a woman craves power instead of accepting her natural, womanly role."
When Kirk twice says "if only" at the end, he means "if only she hadn't been so unnaturally obsessed and power hungry!" not "if only the system had allowed her a chance to live her dreams!"
There's room for interpretation, but that's mine.
It was interesting, though, that McCoy didn't find any significant difference in "Kirk's" emotional and psychological makeup from when he first became a captain. In that, there is a hint of "huh, maybe Janice COULD have become a great captain."
But that hint is overwhelmed by the explicit talk of how sad it is she can't accept her womanhood, how awful her desire for power is, and how "Kirk's" behavior makes McCoy's findings nearly unbelievable.
Roddenberry . . . he was somewhat ahead of his time, but still, a man of his time.
I accept TOS for what it is - like most granddaddies, a very mixed bag.
Mon, Jun 10, 2019, 11:14pm (UTC -5)
I enjoyed watching TOS more than I thought I would. I wasn't at all surprised by the cheesiness, the occasional and laughably over-the-top Shatnerisms, the in-your-face sexism, or the wince-worthy preachiness of some eps. I knew to expect these things, so I took them in stride.
Things that did surprise me:
--Nimoy. Wow, he's really good.
--The chemistry of the Big Three - never since repeated.
--Shatner is mostly pretty good. It's just that when he's bad, he's awful. The awfulness was what stuck in my brain from long ago, but that was unfair. Brooks was definitely worse than Shatner. I had assumed the opposite.
== How interminable much of Season 3 felt. There was boring episode after boring episode. But enough occasional sparks to keep me going.
--Though McCoy's bewildering obstinacy about Spock's stoicism was often annoying, the likeable Kelly managed to be the real charmer of the trio.
--With the exception of Scotty, really, really poor development of any characters outside the Big Three.
I liked (not in order): Tribbles, Yesterdays, City, Wink of an Eye, Charlie, Menagerie, Space Seed, Mirror, Piece of the Action, Other Side of Paradise.
I may try going through TNG again, next. not sure.
Tue, Jun 11, 2019, 11:41am (UTC -5)
I didn't say this on the DS9 thread when you got to the end of that series, but meant to: Thanks for bringing your rewatch of all these shows back here to share with us. It was fun and enlightening to hear your perspectives over the past several months!
Tue, Jun 11, 2019, 2:32pm (UTC -5)
Nimoy really blows me away. He's magic in the role and did so much to create that iconic, weird character.
Tue, Jun 11, 2019, 2:47pm (UTC -5)
Personally I think Shatner is the best actor in all of Trek, however this needs to be qualified with a strong proviso, which is that his task wasn't the same as any other actor in TOS nor in any of the others: he had to not only single-handedly created the dramatic tension in most scene using only his face and body, but also had to effectively create special effects using only his reactions. Imagine Marvel movies but where there's no CGI and the actors themselves would have to sell their reactions to blasts and lasers. True, TOS did have the odd on-screen special effects like a phasor, but for the most part all the various things that happen to Kirk are sold mostly on his famous 'hands out' routine that's imitated so often. This can come off as alternatively awesome or legendarily corny, but remember that it was in an era where there wasn't really any "serious" sci-fi on TV and where there was no established standard for how to show these things. What Shatner lacked in subtlety at times he made up for in spades with pure energy.
One thing I especially note about not just Shatner (although largely him) but also Spock, Bones and even Scotty and Sulu, is that bridge shots during tense moments are shot in two general ways to get the maximum tension, which are to use both wide shots as well as super-close-ups. Especially in the close-ups these actors had such a focus on the object of tension (such as an alien ship, space monster, etc) that you can see the immediate danger written all over them. The music is iconic at times and one hears the background klaxon sounding, but most of the reality of the danger is generated by their faces, and no one on any Trek show following this could match any of them. Not even close, although Stewart's focus might perhaps be put at the same general level when needed. But due to camera technique, lighting usage changes, and better effects, Stewart wasn't called on in quite the same way to personally sell the Enterprise being in danger. Very often in TNG the shots move from person to person, from interior to exterior shots, and rarely is the sole object of our attention the face of a single bridge officer as it so often was in TOS. That they could have multiple actors able to pull that off and create (IMO) high levels of tension is amazing, both directorally and in terms of their camera techniques. They also used *tons* of lighting to create light/shadow regions on the actors' faces in TOS just to accentuate how much their faces sold the moments. Kirk especially often got very special lighting for close-ups that didn't come close to having continuity with the wide shots, very deliberately. These guys were just something else.
I think maybe Rahul or someone else mentioned something similar at one point, but I think the actors on TOS were just leagues ahead of most who followed. I don't know what it is, but it seems maybe the standards back then were just higher, with much less reliance on editing technology and more on the humans. Or maybe their casting and directing was just superlatively good. It's hard to say.
Tue, Jun 11, 2019, 8:29pm (UTC -5)
Yes, we once had a discussion where I said something to the effect that the TOS cast and guest actors absolutely blew away their counterparts on subsequent Treks. Shatner is fantastic and I still shake my head at those who criticize his acting. Nimoy is outstanding as well and I'd say, that from the other Treks, only Stewart is in the same league.
But your comment about lighting/shots/direction got me thinking about something else that made the demands on the TOS cast far greater than other Treks. Obviously back in the 60s, Trek didn't have great special effects and I don't think the intention ever was to wow even the 60s audience with what special effects they had. Subsequent Treks, I believe, did try (especially DSC) to impress their viewers with VFX, CGI such that part of their audience came to depend on this aspect of entertainment and may not be able to recognize/appreciate classic, excellent acting to carry a show. Thus the demands on the cast/guest actors wasn't as high and, as a result, you got weaker actors. I'm generalizing a bit but I think this is essentially the development of a certain aspect of Trek and sci-fi overall.
Tue, Jun 11, 2019, 8:33pm (UTC -5)
Great points about what the TOS actors, particularly Shatner, were called upon to do, and how well they managed.
@William B and Jammer, thanks for your nice words. I love having this site to share my thoughts. I never dreamed there was such an active, interesting site for these older shows.
Wed, Jun 12, 2019, 10:44am (UTC -5)
Just reading through your comments now as I rewatch TOS (I had forgotten a lot of it).
I agree with you that there hasn't been a trio as iconic as Kirk-Spock-McCoy since their inception and I think that's due to many factors. Acting's definitely a part of it, but also much of it comes down to the three branching off into the three areas of debate: Logos (Spock), Pathos (McCoy), and Ethos (Kirk). Many arguments in western culture are based on these three methods, and Trek is cerebral enough that it can really get mileage out of characters discussing big topics on these levels.
Still, I think the other shows excel in other ways. Since you're thinking of watching TNG next, I want to mention that the strength of that show is having a cast that really gets along well (Data and Geordi seem like they're friends on and off screen). The guest characters are really superb too, many of them going on to leading big careers after Star Trek.
Mon, Jun 17, 2019, 2:28pm (UTC -5)
My favorite part was the letter Leonard wrote Adam, and George T telling about how Leonard insisted he and Nichelle ne included in the animated series. Leonard was nowhere near perfect, but it was plain he did his best and worked very, very hard.
An interesting man, an interesting life, an interesting documentary.
@Chrome, thanks for your thoughts and info on TNG.
Sun, Aug 4, 2019, 1:23pm (UTC -5)
Unfortunately the main issue raised but ignored by the story (where are the female starship captains?) is more compelling than the "crazy woman" story, and it remains a sad, sour last note for the series. A real wasted opportunity for Trek's inclusive legacy.
Random Thoughts:
Where's the concern for Lester's dead staff? Isn't anybody going to be arrested?
Lester seems to have a pretty good (and unrelated) career as it is, so her beef with Kirk seems to be entirely personal. Not just any captain would do. She wanted to be Jim Kirk. If they went deeper with that it might have been interesting.
Coleman, the washed-up doctor doormat, asks to "take care of her" at the end, but how? Aren't they both going to Federation prison/rehab or whatever happens to murderers in Star Trek?
Shatner as Lester is off the rails and gets all the attention, but Sandra Smith as Kirk is quite good.
This reminds me of the DS9 episode "Invasive Procedures" where the Dax symbiont is stolen by an unsuccessful guy that felt wronged for not being chosen as a Trill host, and he was aided by his even more insecure lover. That was a much better story.
Mon, Aug 5, 2019, 11:05am (UTC -5)
Nevertheless, I largely agree with Jammer's review. Shatner was really on his game this episode, and it's fun to see "someone else" inside the Captain. The scenes that worked really well were the ones that showed how blindly the crew on the Enterprise were willing to follow a leader because of the chain of command - despite that leader's increasingly questionable actions. Insert relevant modern-day political commentary here.
Sandra Smith was also wonderful to watch with her depiction of Kirk and it was fun seeing her outmatch the intruder on a cerebral level at a hearing. So I'd say the episode is largely a fun watch but with a huge ASTERIX.
Tue, Dec 3, 2019, 2:56pm (UTC -5)
Let all the triggly puffs be triggered by this episode. You can't change the nature of men and women.
Tue, May 5, 2020, 2:07pm (UTC -5)
Tue, May 5, 2020, 2:46pm (UTC -5)
"Besides, we want people promoted due to capabilities not due to gender, to fill out quotas."
Or race! Them blacks... I'm not saying that they shouldn't be fire fighters but if a white guy has better scores. Should a white guy be held back because of some leftist ideology. That is not racist. This is 1981.
And don't get me started on all them gays. Not that there is anything wrong with that!
That is a very good opinion coming from a very smart brain.
Wed, May 6, 2020, 8:03am (UTC -5)
Booming also makes a good point; with their genetic predisposition toward high IQs, all high-ranking jobs should be performed by Ashkenazic Jews.
These are good opinions coming from very smart brains.
Wed, May 6, 2020, 12:21pm (UTC -5)
"be performed by Ashkenazic Jews."
Don't forget the other Asians. They are super smart. I think it is because of the chopsticks. They train all parts of the brains. We Germans come from central Asia, by the way. When we wandered into Europe we combined our brain power with the muscle of the neanderthals to create the ultimate ubermensch.
Sun, May 31, 2020, 3:49pm (UTC -5)
As always with STC, I'm impressed with the recreation of TOS -- this time it is the exterior visual of the starbase. There's a certain aesthetic to those images like the mining plant in "The Devil in the Dark" or the plant in "Where No Man Has Gone Before" and it is captured perfectly here. Well done STC.
One thing came up here that I'm not sure is true -- this episode says that the Federation composed of Earth, Vulcan, Andorians and Tellarites came about to counter the Romulan threat. I didn't think it was spurred into creation by a particular threat...
Anyhow, so there's this very driven woman Garrett who wants command of the Hood and comes across as so untrustworthy b/c she won't answer questions about a mission gone wrong and then calls for an immediate decision -- which brings about a court room scene just like in "Court Martial". This Garrett character could have been written better.
And then there's the Federation hesitant to have a female captain due to Tellarites being backward and potentially pulling out of the alliance. This strikes me as bizarre and unrealistic.
The B-plot is weak here. Chekov "MacGyvers" a way to take down the Hood's shields so Scotty and the others can beam back before the Hood blows up. That was a bit ridiculous but it wasn't as bad, to me, as how the writers made Scotty so apathetic about having nothing he can do to stop the Hood from blowing up -- he's gone way farther in coming up with miracles ("That Which Survives", "The Doomsday Machine", "The Naked Time" come to mind). Bottom line, the script demanded that the Hood be blown up so a decision does not have to be made between Garrett and Spock for its command.
2.5 stars for "Embracing the Winds" -- barely. Could have really taken some risks here. STC definitely focuses on its issues of the day but I don't know what was accomplished here. I think most would pick Spock over Garrett due to her evasiveness and obviously feeling Spock is uber-capable. So what was the purpose of having Garrett have some dubious actions to raise doubts? It didn't become an issue of just her gender, but then the whole decision is rendered moot anyway by the Hood blowing up.
I think what STC has accomplished is fantastic but what's missing is the writing/premises/ideas to really come up with some memorable episodes.
Mon, Oct 19, 2020, 10:12pm (UTC -5)
There is nothing in modern warfare which requires the biological traits men possess. Women are smaller targets who consume less rations and can fit more readily into smaller spaces within vehicles, again making them advantageous. Anyone can pull a trigger, anyone can aim, anyone can understand the machinery of modern warfare and follow orders.
On the other hand, if more women were in positions of power, worldwide, we'd probably have a lot less need for armies in the first place. You know, that whole preferring to have children and homes and stuff. And the lack of.. wait for it ... testosterone combined with toxic masculinity.
I say all that as a man, and no, not some "LOL, wimp beta male". My personality is as a leader of a pack, but not because of the dangly bits. I respect women - they have a lot more strength than idiots like you.
Tue, Oct 20, 2020, 1:12am (UTC -5)
Tue, Oct 20, 2020, 4:59pm (UTC -5)
Except for, apparently, any one that dares to disagree with you. Is it possible to be any more cliched?
Tue, Nov 10, 2020, 4:01am (UTC -5)
As far as sexism goes, I don't believe it. This particular woman is...disturbed. There is no hint that the show is saying all women are emotional basket cases! I think people just enjoy bashing old shows for whatever they think is wrong even when it isn't there.
Sat, Jan 23, 2021, 11:43am (UTC -5)
Star Trek season 3 episode 24
“If only.”
- Kirk has the series' last words.
2 stars (out of 4)
Here we have a fairly simple story, told far better in TNG’s “We’ll Always have Paris.”
There, Picard breaks the heart of his girlfriend by choosing his career. He literally abandons their relationship. Picard stands her up at the cafe where they were supposed to meet. The life of a starship captain is a lonely one. Starship captains are already married - to their ships. Starship captains have no place in their lives for love (JANICE: Your world of starship captains doesn't admit women. It isn't fair.). Kirk is no different.
We see the similarity between Picard and Kirk in Star Trek: Generations. But more than that, as @R.J. points out, Kirk says it plainly in "The Corbomite Maneuver” (KIRK: I've already got a female to worry about. Her name's the Enterprise.). For whatever reason “Turnabout Intruder” takes this fairly simply premise and turns the volume up to 11, and in the process gives us a screeching and unfortunate conclusion to an otherwise very fine series.
This episode fails in two very unrelated ways.
First, Spock has had to decide which Kirk is the real Kirk several times before. In “The Enemy Within” when Kirk was split in two - evil Kirk and pansy Kirk. "Mirror, Mirror" when Spock threw Mirror Kirk into the brig fairly quickly. And most relevant for us here, in “Whom the Gods would Destroy,” when Garth of Izar takes the form of Kirk and starts recounting well known tactical moves in a failed attempt to convince Spock that he was Kirk. Here, as @Linda says, in the scene where Janice (with Kirk inside) is recounting for Spock their past shared experiences, Spock and McCoy should have just asked Kirk (with Janice inside) the same types of questions. There is no way she’d be able to pass that test. I mean, she kept calling Bones "Dr. McCoy," because she had no idea what Kirk normally called him.
Second, this episode fails because we’ve basically been down this road with professional women before. In “Metamorphosis,” the Assistant Federation Commissioner Hedford has those key lines,
NANCY: I don't want to die. I've been good at my job, but I've never been loved. Never. What kind of life is that? Not to be loved, never to have shown love?
We essentially have the same set up here with Janice,
JANICE: The year we were together at Starfleet is the only time in my life I was alive.
And then later,
Janice (in Kirk’s body): Believe me, it's better to be dead than to live alone in the body of a woman. It's better to be dead.
The fact that this was done already, and done much better, should have been a clue that the jig was up. The show had burned itself out.
When you take into account the ridiculous number of episodes in this season that leaned on the same basic tropes - an illness was the ticking clock (plague, disease, etc.); someone on the crew goes mad (or, for a change, the whole crew goes mad); and the third trope, the ship gets taken over - Turnabout Intruder takes the cake, because we have all three: fake Kirk uses Janice’s illness as a ticking clock to force a diversion of the ship, Kirk acts mad because Janice is mad, and third, oh yeah, Janice and her Doctor boyfriend take over the ship. Turnabout Intruder may be the Platonic ideal of a Season 3 episode!
This is not an episode about a woman’s ability to command. This series literally started with a female first officer. This is not an episode about feminists hating men. It’s not even about bad breakups, even if it is basically a jilted lover switching bodies and then fucking over her ex boyfriend.
If this show is about anything (*if* being the key word), it’s about the basic common sense notion that you don’t stick your dick in crazy.
https://youtu.be/iuVmKam3m34
There are some nice touches to be sure. As @Trek fan points out, it is good to see that Spock and Bones no longer vacillate about removing Kirk from command, especially after the disastrous consequences of hesitating in "The Deadly Years.” Chekov and Sulu are fun here, and as @Rahul says, watching Shatner play a woman is super fun. Plus, for no apparent reason, thanks to @Trent, we get to read Gene’s letter to Asimov! But the fact that people (including @Trish, who has had wonderful comments throughout the series) have read all kinds of BS into this BS episode is a testament to its many, many failings.
How sad.
This is the way the show ends
This is the way the show ends
This is the way the show ends
Not with a bang but a whimper.
Wed, Feb 10, 2021, 1:46pm (UTC -5)
Between the subject matter and Kirk filing his nails, it’s no wonder McCoy suffered an eyebrow sprain.
Roddenberry said he wanted to go where no man had gone before, and Wallerstein took him there.
Talk about going down in a blaze of glory...
But still very entertaining to watch in a train wreck sort of way! You can tell the cast was committed to their characters right to the bitter end. Bravo.
Sat, Feb 20, 2021, 9:38pm (UTC -5)
"Turn About Intruder" was gripping drama, with fine performances by all involved. It's a shame the show was cancelled after that. Like Muhammad Ali it was stripped of it's prime. Also like Ali it definitely had a great comeback.
Sat, Feb 20, 2021, 10:14pm (UTC -5)
Captain Kirk had to sell that he had been taken over by a woman. Subtle actions would not have portrayed it justly. He had to go all ham or he would have just been Captain Kirk. Like it or not, the story required a caricature of femininity.
As for women not being captains, it would have been odd and probably off putting at that time The tv show "Julia" was only just breaking boundaries for it's portrayal of a black, single, successful woman. Let's remember, Women's basketball, soccer, wrestling or boxing wouldn't be a thing until decades later.
So yeah, Tos couldn't be made today without the SJW's going all out to cancel it on twitter but it did a great job for it's time.
Thu, Apr 1, 2021, 10:13pm (UTC -5)
TOS - "Her life could have been as rich as any woman's. If only, if only." - lousy
TNG - "Five-card stud, nothing wild - and the sky's the limit" - good
DS9 - "The more things change, the more they stay the stay" - dumb cliche plus wrong character
VOY - "Set a course - for home" - good call-back
ENT - "To boldly go where no man has gone before" - was nice before this, but already used too many times
Mon, May 24, 2021, 2:45am (UTC -5)
I’ve read that the delay showing this episode was nothing to do with Roddenberry or others connected with the show. It was apparently due to Eisenhower’s death? Though I can’t see why that should have been.
Wikipedia:
“ Originally scheduled to air at 10pm on Friday, March 28, 1969, NBC pre-empted it with a special report on former U.S. President Dwight D. Eisenhower, who had died earlier that day.[1] On June 3, 1969, after an absence of two months, Star Trek was brought back on a new night and time: Tuesdays at 7:30pm. "Turnabout Intruder" was the only first-run episode to be shown in this new time slot.”
Tue, May 25, 2021, 9:18am (UTC -5)
Actually, the episode could be reworked (Star Trek Continues?) :
- the team beams down to Comus II, but instead of the insanely jealous Janice Lester, the "patient" is none other than Kirk's Academy classmate Finnegan, whom we first saw in 'Shore Leave'. Frustrated by his lack of progress in Starfleet compared to Kirk, it's Finnegan who effects the mind swap. The other doctor would have to be a woman to keep the love interest going.
The advantage of this rework is that Shatner could have had great fun acting the part of the pugilistic Finnegan; some scenery would have got chewed but less than Kirk-as-Janice. It would also have eliminated the sexist overtones and given us a second view of Finnegan - this time the real one rather than a figment of Kirk's memory.
However, I'd still give it a shade under 3 stars (at least 3 stars for the rework!)
Thu, Jul 1, 2021, 9:00pm (UTC -5)
Trek WAS very progressive for its time. Some bits are misunderstood, like the miniskirts. That was considered empowering at the time.
Shatner does go hilariously over the top, but that's his style. Crossing his legs and doing his nails was hilarious. Keep in mind, he's not just playing a woman, he's playing a woman that is deranged with hatred toward him specifically.
Sandra Smith does a pretty good Kirk, and I believe she's the first performer to play Kirk besides Shatner.
This episode has good continuity with both previous events and the officers themselves.
Thu, Jul 1, 2021, 9:04pm (UTC -5)
The presentation of Ilia was a pretty big failure. The idea was that Deltans are dangerously sexy to humans and have pheromones etc etc. That's why she mentions her oath of celibacy. It makes little sense in The Motion Picture film but is explained far better in the novel.
Sun, Jul 4, 2021, 3:06pm (UTC -5)
Mon, Jul 5, 2021, 2:34am (UTC -5)
I insist that she must have been insane.
Know what would be awesome? If the upcoming Strange New Worlds series did The Joy Machine (the episode that was about to start filming next before the cancellation). Obviously the script would need to be re-written, but if they kept it as close to the original as possible . . . how cool would that be? What a tribute. I think CBS owns the script outright and wouldn't need to pay the people who originally wrote it and edited it again, which could otherwise make it too expensive and discourage them . . . and there are all kinds of Guild rules about credit that might make it too complicated to produce something that was written so long ago. But man. I can dream. My hopes are sky-high for that series and IT WOULD BE SO COOL.
Mon, Jul 5, 2021, 3:34am (UTC -5)
Sat, Jul 10, 2021, 9:58am (UTC -5)
If only what? If only she was a man. I see Kirk utter the words, “If only” in disbelief that that with all of human kind’s progressive accomplishments, he still can’t believe that society does not see women entirely as equals, disappointed in the fact that one of her obstacles for command was gender. Star Trek episodes as we all know are allegories. This episode reflects Gene’s hope that someday in the real world women will be able to achieve accomplishments that were only afforded to men in the 60’s.
Sun, Jul 11, 2021, 3:46pm (UTC -5)
So that implies Lester could've been a Captain of a starship if she was properly trained OR he means Temperament = Girl which could be the case.
Sun, Jul 11, 2021, 3:57pm (UTC -5)
to which Kirk says: "No, it isn't."
Sun, Jul 11, 2021, 4:35pm (UTC -5)
Sun, Jul 11, 2021, 5:53pm (UTC -5)
I think Kirk's line "if only..." could be completed by him as "if only you [Lester] weren't a complete psycho, you could have been captain" or "if only you [Lester] weren't going to spend the rest of your life in an institution, you could have been captain." Given that Lester became a total psycho, I think one could assume she was passed over for captain opportunities earlier in her career for not meeting some behavioural/professional standards.
Sun, Jul 11, 2021, 7:51pm (UTC -5)
This is a uncharacteristically clever line by Roddenberry IF he knew that most of the audience in the 60s would take it as "This women should've known her place and tried not to do a man's job" but he actually meant it as "If only she wasn't a woman trying to emulate a psychopathic man, she could've had as rich of a life as any women (and man)"
But since it's the 60s it's easy to read it solely as the former.
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 1:01am (UTC -5)
On the other hand they couldn't help themselves using the age old narrative about the dangers of women who want power. The most famous one being Lady Macbeth who also goes crazy.
So there is a three layered disconnect.
- Women not being allowed becoming captains is not fair.
- The Federation accepted the discrimination of women?
- Women and power. Lester wants power but cannot control her emotions.
We all know that they almost made a women first officer but the studio wouldn't allow it. Who knows, maybe the studio wouldn't allow female captains. It is a feminist message combined with an anti-feminist narrative.
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 11:07am (UTC -5)
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 11:37am (UTC -5)
Something like that.
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 12:52pm (UTC -5)
That's an interesting take on it, that it may have been network execs who had the rule against female captains. (Trek fans know the execs didn't react well to Majel Barrett's character as the first officer in the first pilot episode, and that reaction may have included a blanket rejection of female command staff.)
I think that it's certainly true that a committed feminist (a group in which I count myself) is often caught in a no-win scenario: Written or unwritten rules bar you from a role, and then the very fact that you push back against this restriction is used to brand you as "power-hungry" and "not wanting it for the right reason" (even though you only pushed back because wanting it for the right reason didn't get you anywhere). It's only natural for a personality to end up warped (sometimes a little, sometimes a lot) by a lifetime of being held back from what you feel to be your full potential and from an opportunity to make the best contribution you feel you could make to your community. It makes it easy for those who are quite comfortable with the rule (male or female) to say, "You obviously wouldn't have been good at it anyway," even "Maybe the rule is right, because maybe no woman would ever be good at it." Those who benefit the most from the rule will drop out the "maybes."
I had a younger co-worker once who said she saw me as a feminist, and herself as an "independent woman." I could tell she thought that her road was better, less strident. I told her that the reason she had the option of being an independent woman without personally focusing on being a feminist was because feminists of my age and older had fought VERY hard to open up that option for her.
In-universe, perhaps Starfleet's Janice Lesters were the ones who made its Captain Janeways and Admiral Brands possible, even if they seemed at the time to be "hurting their own cause."
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 12:57pm (UTC -5)
I think the most important characteristic about Lester for the purposes of this episode is not that she's female but that she's a vengeful psychopath. So the sexism argument doesn't work for me because the woman in question is written in such a farfetched way -- this is a TV show which doesn't approximate real life very well. I would imagine that if a highly trained and competent female was passed over for a promotion to captain, she keep working hard at her job with the hope of eventually getting there. She wouldn't go psycho and orchestrate deaths and try the kind of shit Lester pulled on Kirk.
I think if we de-construct this episode, it could/would probably have started with a high-level pitch like "Hey, let's get Shatner to chew scenery -- make him act like a vengeful crazy woman". And then they'd tack on the life-entity transfer, mutiny etc. So I don't think it would have started with some kind of examination of sexism / glass ceiling -- otherwise the episode would be an utter failure (very poorly written and conceived). But as a plot-based drama with plenty of scenery chewing, it's pretty good.
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 12:58pm (UTC -5)
"If only …"
… the execs had accepted the first pilot, female characters could have had a lot more lines that would have been a lot more compelling than "Yes, Doctor" and "Hailing frequencies open."
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 1:16pm (UTC -5)
"So the sexism argument doesn't work for me because the woman in question is written in such a farfetched way -- this is a TV show which doesn't approximate real life very well. I would imagine that if a highly trained and competent female was passed over for a promotion to captain, she keep working hard at her job with the hope of eventually getting there. She wouldn't go psycho and orchestrate deaths and try the kind of shit Lester pulled on Kirk."
I think this is a bit putting the cart before the horse as an argument. You ask why she had to be quite so crazy - but the answer is that the not-crazy ladies didn't concoct a crazy plan to body swap and take over a ship. Lester is the extreme version of what we are meant to understand is a more widespread discontent. Now I think the episode is about sociology in the Federation, but I also don't think Lester's idea that it's not fair for women is itself supposed to be dismissable as "she's nuts." One fault I do have with the episode is that since she is such an unreliable source, we don't actually know for sure whether she's just the tip of the iceberg of an entire discontented sex, or whether she's really the only woman who wanted the captaincy this bad.
But my argument, at least, is that if you push people hard enough, most will take it and trudge forward, while some will crack and react harshly. That's just to say it's a bell-shaped distribution of responses to injustice or pressure. That the odd person like Lester is pushed too far and goes crazy doesn't mean we should be sorry she's not a starship captain, but more importantly it may point toward a larger trend of women made to feel shut out. It's that larger trend I'm interested in, not whether Lester could have or should have been a captain.
@ Trish,
"… the execs had accepted the first pilot, female characters could have had a lot more lines that would have been a lot more compelling than "Yes, Doctor" and "Hailing frequencies open.""
Yes, my guess would be Gene wrote this as a middle finger to the execs, when the show was done and there was nothing else they could do to him, and that it was at least primarily based on their treatment of his wife when they barred her from appearing as Number One.
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 1:39pm (UTC -5)
You forgot "what is--- love?"
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 1:58pm (UTC -5)
I think you're actually making my point -- if this episode is meant to shine a light on the "larger trend of women being shut out" then it would be, as I said, "an utter failure (very poorly written and conceived)".
So I agree with what you're saying here:
"One fault I do have with the episode is that since she is such an unreliable source, we don't actually know for sure whether she's just the tip of the iceberg of an entire discontented sex, or whether she's really the only woman who wanted the captaincy this bad."
It comes down to what the primary thrust of the episode becomes but, of course, nothing is just there purely at face value. I can believe Gene wanted a prominent female (as in "The Cage") and was overruled, but then what we got here is a mess of an attempt at social commentary.
So I think that however this episode got reworked, it became more plot-driven primarily and less about making social commentary sledge-hammer-style which Trek is wont to do. That folks like you can think about the larger trend re. women/glass ceiling is more a credit to you than the writers/editors/producers of this episode.
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 2:09pm (UTC -5)
We are certainly not disagreeing that the episode such as it is has trouble getting across any sort of clear point. It ends up being noteworthy first and foremost for the performances of the actors. The fact that we need to have a debate is already evidence enough that its purpose was muddled in the execution. But what I am debating, anyhow, is the author's intention, which IMO is about sending a message to real world people that they are prigs. I think there isn't much fruit to be plucked in trying to figure out how the "no female captain" rule affects canon, can be reconciled with ENT, or anything else in-universe. It barely matters (to me at least) what it implies in-universe.
I should mention anecdotally, that when I was a kid I tended to find TOS episode not only highly watchable, but also striking to me in their messaging. Aside from a few episodes that were hard for me to grok as a 9 year old (like Mudd's Women, whose purpose was opaque to me, as well as The Conscience of the King, which seemed hard to follow), almost all of them spoke their messages loud and clear. And even Turnabout Intruder was pretty clear to 9 year old me as being about how unfair things were for women. The fact that Lester was nuts didn't strike me as meaning she was talking nonsense; it was more like "she is talking sense, and also has to be stopped". It didn't occur to me then to question her statements of fact, and even now I suspect the intent is that she speaks truth even though it's pushed her over the edge. That much does seem to come across at least in a vague way.
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 2:59pm (UTC -5)
An interesting hypothesis. Still making her completely crazy would work against such a message. If she had been ruthless but capable and Kirk had won in the end not because she is a lunatic but because he outsmarts her would have worked better but yeah one could see it as a meta narrative.
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 3:34pm (UTC -5)
It's like saying, "oh, you've been driven mad by this system that's hurting you, well how can be believe you since you're mad?" It's an easy way to gaslight a legitimate complaint made by someone who's beyond the point where they can make it civilly. We shouldn't accept her behavior, but we can accept that the cause of it is a real problem needing fixing.
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 4:04pm (UTC -5)
You may be going down a slippery slope here. True, Lester is not like Lord Garth in terms of ambition and level of insanity but she is certifiably insane. That she is limiting her ambitions to being a starship captain, I think is basically irrelevant. If memory serves (haven't seen this episode in its entirety in years) I believe she orchestrated the deaths of a number of scientists on the planet -- radiation poisoning or some such. She tries to kill Kirk.
Lester, to me, is very much a lone wolf. She has, for all intents and purposes, gone postal. I would find it very hard to have a shred of sympathy for the cause of a person who guns down a bunch of his co-workers, for example. The cause is selfish. That's why, to me, this episode fails miserably as social commentary and gets reduced, albeit very entertainingly, to a fairly mechanical episode. But since this is television, it can hint at a societal issue.
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 4:33pm (UTC -5)
I didn't remember at all about Lester murdering a bunch of scientists. I'll have to watch it again and get back to you...
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 4:47pm (UTC -5)
I'll save you the trouble. From Memory Alpha: https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Turnabout_Intruder_(episode)
"Coleman knows Lester's plans, and in fact knows both that celebium was the lethal agent and that Lester had caused the deaths by sending the personnel to where the celebium shielding was weak."
Mon, Jul 12, 2021, 4:49pm (UTC -5)
Rahul is correct, she is a mass murderer. She tricks the physician into helping her murder the entire staff.
Sat, Jul 17, 2021, 7:28am (UTC -5)
It could have probably been handled better, but that's true of all the episodes at this point in the show's run. For well-documented reasons.
Tue, Oct 5, 2021, 12:58am (UTC -5)
Fri, Oct 22, 2021, 8:32pm (UTC -5)
Obviously not a fitting finale, although at least the whole cast were involved minus Uhura.
Fri, Oct 22, 2021, 11:21pm (UTC -5)
Sat, Feb 19, 2022, 9:46pm (UTC -5)
Sat, Feb 19, 2022, 10:16pm (UTC -5)
My biggest complaint about Turnabout Intruder (maybe others felt the same) was how could Lester maintain the guise of Kirk. Yes, she knew details but not daily events, past and current. Would she know every member of the crew, or any interactions Kirk had with them, and especially those with Spock, McCoy and Scotty. How would she handle real crises? It just couldn't last. But the one saving grace is the loyalty factor the crew had for Kirk. Same with The Enterprise Incident.
Sun, Feb 20, 2022, 2:44am (UTC -5)
"I watched ST : Enterprise Home, spotlighting Archer's relationship with Captain Hernandez, a woman caption, and wondered why it seemed there were no women captains in TOS. By Next Gen, they started to appear.
"
That is a retcon. In the 1960 a huge chunk of the audience would have been offended by the thought of a female captain, but that didn't really make sense for a modern state like the Federation, so they just ignored that aspect and several others of TOS in later iterations.
Sat, May 14, 2022, 5:45pm (UTC -5)
" "Her life could have been as fulfilled as any other woman". The sad, sad last line of a series I loved."
Which wasn't what Kirk actually said. As a couple of other posters have pointed out, the last lines were, "Her life could have been as rich as any woman's. If only, if only."
Most of the discussion above seems to miss the episode's essential subtext: Kirk and Janice Lester shared a profound romantic relationship in the past (they both express this multiple times, both to each other and to other characters, and even Lester's pathetic special doctor friend commented on it). Everything that goes on between them in the episode is deeply PERSONAL.
When Kirk says regretfully that Lester's life "could have been as rich as any woman's", that is a high compliment coming from a man who has literally traveled the galaxy and met some of its most luminary and remarkable figures. Surely when he then trails away wistfully, "If only... If only...", it is a personal expression about what has become of the woman he loved, and what their life and relationship might have been, not commentary on gender rights or Starfleet politics.
Only a two star episode for me, but some of the criticism here is off the mark.
Sun, Jul 24, 2022, 1:47am (UTC -5)
Hm.. how do you interpret the following: "And most of all, she wanted to murder James Kirk, a man who once loved her. But her intense hatred of her own womanhood made life with her impossible."
Fri, Aug 19, 2022, 10:09pm (UTC -5)
Overwrought Lester in the body of Kirk would have been much more effective and believable villain without the shrieking
Did Shatner think that was the best way to carry out the character of Lester in Kirk?
Would be interesting to know especially since this closed out the season and ended the show
Tue, Sep 27, 2022, 3:00pm (UTC -5)
No B5, no "The Expanse", no Star Wars -- but BSG ranked No. 42. BSG has been on my list for some time...
Wed, Dec 21, 2022, 7:12pm (UTC -5)
I didn't think Lester was a doctor of medicine by the way. Wasn't she an archaeologist or something similar, like Professor Crater in 'The Man Trap'?
I also don't get how her accomplice talks about wanting to take care of her - Coleman can't plead diminished responsibility for his complicity in the deliberate killing of their co-workers, not to mention going along with her to the cells to inject Lester 's body with a doubly lethal dose of something. Basically they should both be locked up - him in prison, her on some enlightened asylum such as the one in 'Whom God's Destroy '.
Wed, Dec 21, 2022, 7:22pm (UTC -5)
Sat, Feb 4, 2023, 9:09am (UTC -5)
Thu, Feb 9, 2023, 9:07am (UTC -5)
The charges brought against this episode are simple enough: the theme is murky or even indecipherable, and the plotting thin. The problems with plotting were essentially inevitable: how could you ever do a body-takeover story without it being immediately foiled by questioning about details only Kirk could know? This same problem happens in Whom Gods Destroy. But since we already know this sort of story is impossible to write without glaring holes in its logic, we can perhaps forgive that and just see what it has to offer us. I thought of a few things that could have shored up the plot, one of which is to just allow the body transfer device to also allow Kirk and Lester to see into each others' minds as well. That way Lester would not only be able to offer up details that only Kirk would know, but additionally it would give Kirk insight into what's happened to Lester. It would give us more about their relationship. Another device could have been to show Lester having used extreme methods to obtain various knowledge about Kirk, maybe even a spy aboard the Enterprise.
In any case I'm content to put this objection behind me, as a more carefully plotted out story that had more details and nuances would exceed the alotted air length of the episode. This kind of story could easily spin out into feature-length, and give us a character study that goes beyond "she's bonkers." But what the teleplay and directing do give us is an extremely tense and thrilling series of scenes. Even when Lester/Kirk is going over the top and everyone knows she/he is insane, the episode brilliantly reminds us of the abject horror of actually supplanting a captain without extreme cause. The threat of public executions becomes that cause, but prior to that "we don't like how you're acting" isn't enough. It is also plausible (and scary) that the security force on a ship could quickly become the Captain's personal army, leaving the officers powerless to oppose him. TOS reminds us again and again just how much power a starship captain has, and we're reminded here once again. This isn't a person you can remove just like that. The gravity of this situation is sold is an amazing scene between Scotty and Bones in the corridor.
And what the story ends up boiling down to is less about what happens if you let a woman run a ship, and more what happens when someone unstable, like a Captain Garth let's say, finds themselves in command of one. It's a very, very bad situation. This by itself would be a worthy story concept. What mires it in confusion is Lester's remark about starfleet not allowing women captains, and Kirk's "if only". If those two lines were cut the story's intent would be clear as crystal, but with them in we're left scratching our heads wondering whether this was supposed to be some kind of statement about women or the treatment of women. We've debated it above, about how it could just as easily be taken to say "look what happens when a woman really does take power" as "look what happens when you dehumanize women and make them desperate". Neither point is made clearly, nor is either given much support by any other part of the story. I must surmise that neither idea matters very much regardless of what the writers may have thought.
The most stunning part of the episode is Shatner's performance. Despite having become infamous for his final overblown theatrics, there are some many outstanding subtleties to what Shatner does that it's clear the theatrics are merely one device used to illustrate total madness. If you haven't watched this one in a while, give it a close look: watch Shatner/Lester's posture, look at the arch of the back and manner of walking. It is all changed, but not forced or exaggerated. This is not Shatner doing a 'woman impression', but just holding his body differently. Look at his reactions in the first scene back on the Enterprise in the transporter room, giving his/her first commands: look how nervous, how cautious, and how aware that any word could be wrong and get him into trouble. Other subtleties are written in, such as "Captain Kirk to the Enterprise" and the manner of addressing everyone in slightly incorrect ways, which show a deep uncertainty about how to do things correctly. And actually this isn't what you'd expect from a body-snatcher episode. In TNG when Picard is replaced by a double he seems to be able to do his ordinary activities quite easily, and it's his personality that's the giveaway. But here we get a more more realistic look at how literally every word spoken risks being wrong in some way, and most of them are. It's basically impossible to actually pull off this sort of caper, and Shatner portrays that beautifully.
While the plotting is shaky and the motives within the story half-baked at best, I nevertheless feel that this is one of the series better offerings, and one of the most exciting in its constant tension level.
Sat, Feb 11, 2023, 6:19am (UTC -5)
As it happens, I haven’t seen this episode for a while, so I re-watched it and mostly agree with the points you made. I tried to pay attention to the more delicate brushstrokes of Shatner’s portrayal of Lester-in-Kirk’s-body and agree that it’s an amazing performance. One thing I noticed is that Lester-in-Kirk’s-body actually smiles a lot, but always at the wrong time, like during an argument. Usually, Kirk rarely smiles, and when he does, it means he’s relaxed or in good mood. As a second thing, Lester-in-Kirk’s-body seems very inwardly focused while Kirk always keeps his eyes and ears open for everything going on around him; he often does several things at the same time and instantly jumps from one subject to another. I think you can watch the episode a dozen times and still find new small details hinting at the fact that Kirk is not himself.
However, I’ll probably never be comfortable with the gender topic here. What I find really annoying is the ambiguousness of the depiction – that it could be either "look what happens when a woman really does take power" or "look what happens when you dehumanize women and make them desperate", as you put it – to me it feels like bad writing, as if the writers themselves couldn’t make up their mind and draw a clear conclusion. But I admit that it feels very realistic that both sides of the issue are there and equally plausible and that we’ll never know for sure what was the cause of Lester being denied captaincy. Was it her mental instability or the glass ceiling at Starfleet? What if both are true, to an extent? I think it’s quite clear that even in the past, during her time at the Academy with Kirk, Lester was not really the sanest person, so that might be a very good reason why she never rose to command: „a position she doesn't merit by temperament or training”, regardless of her sex. It is also undisputed that there are some lines here which reveal that women are indeed discriminated against, like when Lester accuses Spock: “And with the truth revealed that I am not really the captain, and KNOWING that she would not be ALLOWED to serve as the captain, then you would be the captain!” – however, most of them are coming from Lester herself and therefore are not factual, objective statements.
Likewise, what makes her want to destroy Kirk – the worst break-up of all times or the fact that he was promoted and she wasn’t? I think other comments have already mentioned Ben Finney in “Court Martial” – I hadn’t thought of this, but I can now see the parallels. Both episodes show a person from Kirk’s past begrudging him and wanting to take revenge and destroy his career. Both Finney and Lester blame Kirk for having been denied a promotion which he got. The backstories are quite different, but it’s obvious that the role of Megaera is not exclusively female.
I’m glad you mentioned the subject of power and mutiny because that’s one thing I clearly remember from my earlier viewing, and honestly I think the episode doesn’t get anywhere near enough credit for what it shows us here. I loved the tense scene between Scott and McCoy in the corridor, and while it is the first time we see the senior officers openly discussing mutiny, we have already seen them challenging Kirk and questioning his actions in other episodes. What I found more striking was the others’ behavior: Chekov, Sulu, even Lysa are willing to submit to the captain’s authority, as their rank and place in the ship’s command structure demands, but they rebel against Lester when she pronounces the death sentence. Which means nothing less than that a crewmember’s individual conscience and abidance by the laws – they outright tell her that the death penalty is forbidden! – outweigh the obedience they owe Lester as their commanding officer. That’s quite a thing. And it’s a pity that this is always somehow eclipsed by the misbegotten approach to “women in leading positions” which has gained this episode its infamous reputation.
Sat, Feb 11, 2023, 4:31pm (UTC -5)
As the episode progresses, I become rather used to Kirk in Lester's body and I wish she could stay on. To me, Kirk as Lester reads as a strong female. When the transference collapses at the end, it's a bit of a let down.
Sat, Mar 18, 2023, 8:32am (UTC -5)
And no real ending at all... I don't mean a "proper end for the series", there was no ending even in a episode-level: we are running out of time for this episode, so lets just reverse the body exchange. Very lazy.
Sun, Mar 26, 2023, 11:27am (UTC -5)
I was reading through the script and I wondered about this so called paranoia/insanity that Dr. Lester experienced and wanted to pose a thought here. I have wondered if this could have been the result of the celebium itself. The script indicates that exposure to celebium is curable, but that, to me implies, that being cured is a physical one. Nothing is said about the mental issues that might arise, or be exacerbated by exposure.
I was curious about the mass murders of the other staff. Dr. Coleman accuses Dr. Lester of leading them to where the celebium shielding was weakest. Dr. Lester states Dr. Coleman could have treated them but did not. I have to wonder how either one would know the celebium shielding was weakest unless both of them ventured to the area and were exposed first.
The other question is why didn't the other scientists know of the celebium danger? According to Kirk's log, Dr. Lester and Dr. Coleman were not the only scientists on the planet. It makes me wonder if more than these two went slowly insane. Did they experiment with the ancient transfer equipment and that's how the two doctors found it out was still operational?
The other thing that bothers me about Kirk (as Lester), when he makes the snap judgment that Dr. Lester's "intense hatred of her own womanhood made life with her impossible". Prior to that statement, he indicates that he "once loved her".
I find that an amazing contradiction of terms in Kirk. He's way too lazy to get to know women enough to bother making such an assessment. He'd see Janice initially as being just as ambitious as he was and dump her before he could ever get to first base with her.
@F
" it's not the Enterprise crew who won; the writers just made her lose".
Indeed. So many unanswered questions.
Sun, Mar 26, 2023, 1:07pm (UTC -5)
That's an interesting point about the celebium, but I think the episode strongly suggests that there was something wrong with Lester even back when Kirk knew her. Maybe she wasn't a homocidal maniac - the poisoning could have pushed her to that - but I think we need to take Kirk's assessment of her self-hatred at face value. It's a simple bit of exposition that may as well be narrated by the writers.
Sun, Mar 26, 2023, 1:38pm (UTC -5)
I had thought about that, but when I read Kirk's initial log, he mentions the two doctors by name. While doing so, he fails to mention any potential danger to himself or the crew that Janice Lester might pose.
Sun, Mar 26, 2023, 3:52pm (UTC -5)
From what I gather of Kirk's and Lester's relationship, it was a tumultuous one. Both parties admit to loving one another. Yet, throughout the course of the episode, I don't get any vibes of what these two felt for one another, even in anger. Kirk admits to Lester that, had they stayed together, they would have killed one another. I wondered if he really was referring to the act of murder, but was afraid to do so as Lester pointed out.
Mon, Mar 27, 2023, 1:46am (UTC -5)
Side note: I never noticed this before, but during Spock & McCoy’s initial conversation concerning Kirk’s mental health, McCoy’s costume changes from his Starfleet uniform to his medical tunic. Must’ve been a pick-up shot made on another day, and the continuity person had their notes mixed up on what Kelley was wearing in that scene.
Tue, Mar 28, 2023, 2:45pm (UTC -5)
""Unfortunately, unless we ever get our hands on Roddenberry’s story treatment or the 1st draft of the script, we’ll never really know the true intent behind this episode. And additional factors, such as studio execs notes, etc. (Marc Cushman’s books on the making of all 3 seasons show how prevalent they were) could derail much of the original intent as well. A friend of mine used to write for network tv in the 80s and she often joked that by the time a show aired, she sometimes barely recognized it as her own.""
How very true. And so, we have a story where Janice Lester is diagnosed as insane because she wants to be a Starfleet Captain. Add to that Captain Kirk feeling that his love for her should have been enough, but she despised her womanhood, so her life was unfulfilling.
Sad. really.
Thu, May 18, 2023, 10:09pm (UTC -5)
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